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goku90504 posted a comment on Tuesday 16th August 2011 11:44am for A Day in the Life

lol!!!!!! damn good

M2J MandalorianJedi posted a comment on Monday 15th August 2011 12:57pm for A Day in the Life

Well isn't that the ultimate irony?

Rage and Light posted a comment on Monday 15th August 2011 8:37am for A Day in the Life

Great to see a new chapter to this story as I have really enjoyed it so far, I really like the interaction between Harry, Daphne and Tracy. You've built a really great post war world and I hope you finish this story. keep it up

david

Wolf550e posted a comment on Monday 15th August 2011 7:12am for A Day in the Life

"NSA Magic Directorate" - The NSA are not law enforcement. They did not work inside the USA, like the CIA don't work inside the USA. Federal law enforcement in the USA and (counter-)spy work inside the USA is done by the FBI. The NSA is an electronic eavesdropping agency: they read other people's mail and listen to other people's phone calls. Since 9/11 they are illegally using those capabilities to spy on US citizens in the US, but only in the name of of national security, not law enforcement. Because you can't prosecute drug dealers using illegal wiretaps, the NSA is useless to district attorneys and federal U.S. attorneys.

4 hour interview with cops: even if he's never seen the classic youtube video about never talking to the police (highly recommended to anyone over the age of 3), he had to have instructions from his lawyer to never get into an interview room with cops without a lawyer present.

"dealing with the thief" - he's not a thief, he's a robber. It's an important difference.

Clell65619 replied:

- Re: the NSA's status: That's what they want you to think.

- There is no significant difference between a thief and a robber from Harry's POV. He tried to hit Tracey. He was lucky he didn't assume room temperature.

mwinter posted a comment on Monday 15th August 2011 1:34am for A Day in the Life

Please oh Please say that you'll have Daphne and Hermione meet in the next chapter for the audition. Loved it. Much better. Awaiting more.

mawsel posted a comment on Sunday 14th August 2011 9:58pm for A Day in the Life

Never thought 'Duncan Blood' would make another appearance, so very nicely done.
Am very glad to see this story continuing

Wolfric posted a comment on Sunday 14th August 2011 9:39pm for A Day in the Life

Fine chapter. Thanks for writing. W.

Riegert8 posted a comment on Sunday 14th August 2011 7:37pm for A Day in the Life

Very good chapter

brad posted a comment on Sunday 14th August 2011 7:28pm for A Day in the Life

As polished as all of your stories are these days. I always get a kick out of your updates.

Seeing Tracey the super-efficient Syltherin was fine but I must admit I felt a lot better about her and Harry from the 'wrapped around him' point of the story. Sorry, Tracey, but it was sort of good to see your softer - albeit more vulnerable - side. Just to get that confirmation that you truly *don't* keep Harry around for his breakfasts and handyman skills. :-)

(Well, I wasn't really *worried* about Tracey's commitment, but it was still good to see the other - deeper - side of her.)

Harry's sheer competence is always nice to read - oh, I'm talking about his taking down the burglar, of course. But I'm sure his lovemaking is also up to snuff. He's right, life is pretty damned good for him right now, the lucky sod.

Thank you as always for your fan fiction!

Evan Mayerle posted a comment on Sunday 14th August 2011 7:08pm for A Day in the Life

Some nice vignettes there and I tend to share his appreciation of art and attitudes toward it. Methinks that he may yet end up consulting for the magical NSA as a trainer, but nothing else. Of course, if one of his trainees gets taken out, all bets are probably off.

The last vignette with the Duncan Blood movie audition was a very nice touch and 'twill be rather interesting to see how Daphne and Hermione interact at the audition. This story clearly has a few legs yet with chapters yet to go.

HPFan2144 posted a comment on Sunday 14th August 2011 7:06pm for A Day in the Life

I'm so glad you're continuing this story...It is one of my favorites...great start.