vl100butch posted a comment on Wednesday 13th October 2010 7:15pm

One big mistake.....Lieutenants are platoon leaders....not squad leaders....other than that, a superb story....

Clell65619 replied:

- Ah, well, see that's what happens when a Squid writes an Army story.

Quincy posted a comment on Wednesday 13th October 2010 6:26pm

I had it figured by the first third, but I still enjoyed it.

Glen Cornell Doty posted a comment on Wednesday 13th October 2010 6:24pm

This is a really great story. I started out following and admiring your fan fiction but this original piece, is most enjoyable. I was disappointed when it ended. In fact, the idea struck me that you could definitely continue this story. Any chance of that happening? What with your fan fiction and this original story, you provide me with a selection of very entertaining and very readable stories.
Or, in the vernacular of some of the other readers....
GUD STORY!!!!!!! RITE MORE!!!!!!
Thanks for all your efforts

Glen Doty

KenF posted a comment on Wednesday 13th October 2010 4:25pm

OK, that was a bit odd. Have you been mowing again?

Enjoyable, though.

KenF

bael_2345 posted a comment on Wednesday 13th October 2010 3:47pm

i like your one shot here very interesting

MyrkiaMenethil posted a comment on Wednesday 13th October 2010 3:39pm

I liked it, narrator was believable, and I could sympathize with him. Not too sure whats going on with the demon thing, but I liked the idea of a protagonist haunted by his experiences overseas. Overall I'd say this is an 8/10!