dogbertcarroll posted a comment on Monday 27th April 2020 11:01pm

Not sure why he would show Hermione the notes, but the rest was fun.

The Seeker posted a comment on Thursday 5th March 2020 4:38pm

Very good job in expanding Lily and James' sacrifice to its logical end. The conversation between Lily and Tom at the end was very well done.

MrHawkeye posted a comment on Thursday 31st October 2019 2:20am

Interesting story, hope to see more from you soon.

Wolfric posted a comment on Saturday 26th October 2019 3:42am

Good story. Thanks for writing. W.

clpadget posted a comment on Friday 16th August 2019 11:00am

Thanks so much for writing and sharing. I have never read anything like this. Truly appreciate your unique and thought provoking stories. As always, you are a fabulous writer. Thanks so much!

Patches posted a comment on Monday 15th July 2019 9:29pm

This is a different way to get rid of Voldemort. Really well done. I just don't like Dumbledore's meddleling. Thanks for writing. p

KC posted a comment on Sunday 14th July 2019 11:26pm

The attacking only in May reasoning twist is amusing and clever.

robbspotter posted a comment on Thursday 6th June 2019 3:44pm

Completely out there but i love it

Anansii posted a comment on Monday 13th May 2019 8:29pm

Haven't seen THAT before - good one!

cyber_911 posted a comment on Sunday 12th May 2019 1:27am

This was a great read. Thank you.

gmanfatman posted a comment on Saturday 11th May 2019 6:06pm

It is nice that Tom did himself in.

Jimbocous posted a comment on Saturday 11th May 2019 1:55am

A virus, so to speak, eh? Interesting concept. Thanks, fun read.

Wanderer posted a comment on Thursday 9th May 2019 8:58pm

Ha! That was both brilliant and bemusing.

Thanks for sharing!

Pharfig posted a comment on Thursday 9th May 2019 5:54pm

Wow! I haven't seen anything like this before, and it's really good! I think your characterization of Post Possession Voldie was pretty creepy with the way he expressed the "Lilly" emotions. Well done!

GBTtown posted a comment on Thursday 9th May 2019 7:48am

Good short story. Not entirely clear as to why it would be alright for Hermione to find Lily's notes at this time if it endangers her life.

EdTheBeast posted a comment on Wednesday 8th May 2019 7:34pm

Very good. The expectation of H&H was great! Explaining James & Lilys

sacrifices!

multilingual posted a comment on Wednesday 8th May 2019 4:24pm

Thanks for posting this one!

I love the idea of encoding in English-who needs Latinate derivations anyway?

And, of course, lily and James working together for protection, not just one or the other, can give Harry a much more complete concept of parental involvement than JKR's "James died downstairs without even scratching Voldie, and Lily the one who did all the protection" description.

Kudos!

Rick D Gale posted a comment on Wednesday 8th May 2019 1:57pm

A very interesting story. I'm assuming that all the other Horcruxes have been taken care of at this point. It seem like Karma that Voldemort would take care of the rest of the DE's.

Thank you for a great little read.

rdgale

Lady Stardust posted a comment on Wednesday 8th May 2019 1:11pm

This was great!

Lee Dickie posted a comment on Wednesday 8th May 2019 10:17am

Great writing of a novel take on Lily's protection.Well done.