Content Harry Potter Original Young Justice

Reviews

Anansii posted a comment on Monday 13th May 2019 8:29pm

Haven't seen THAT before - good one!

cyber_911 posted a comment on Sunday 12th May 2019 1:27am

This was a great read. Thank you.

gmanfatman posted a comment on Saturday 11th May 2019 6:06pm

It is nice that Tom did himself in.

Jimbocous posted a comment on Saturday 11th May 2019 1:55am

A virus, so to speak, eh? Interesting concept. Thanks, fun read.

Wanderer posted a comment on Thursday 9th May 2019 8:58pm

Ha! That was both brilliant and bemusing.

Thanks for sharing!

Pharfig posted a comment on Thursday 9th May 2019 5:54pm

Wow! I haven't seen anything like this before, and it's really good! I think your characterization of Post Possession Voldie was pretty creepy with the way he expressed the "Lilly" emotions. Well done!

GBTtown posted a comment on Thursday 9th May 2019 7:48am

Good short story. Not entirely clear as to why it would be alright for Hermione to find Lily's notes at this time if it endangers her life.

EdTheBeast posted a comment on Wednesday 8th May 2019 7:34pm

Very good. The expectation of H&H was great! Explaining James & Lilys

sacrifices!

multilingual posted a comment on Wednesday 8th May 2019 4:24pm

Thanks for posting this one!

I love the idea of encoding in English-who needs Latinate derivations anyway?

And, of course, lily and James working together for protection, not just one or the other, can give Harry a much more complete concept of parental involvement than JKR's "James died downstairs without even scratching Voldie, and Lily the one who did all the protection" description.

Kudos!

Rick D Gale posted a comment on Wednesday 8th May 2019 1:57pm

A very interesting story. I'm assuming that all the other Horcruxes have been taken care of at this point. It seem like Karma that Voldemort would take care of the rest of the DE's.

Thank you for a great little read.

rdgale

Lady Stardust posted a comment on Wednesday 8th May 2019 1:11pm

This was great!

Lee Dickie posted a comment on Wednesday 8th May 2019 10:17am

Great writing of a novel take on Lily's protection.Well done.

dragon606 posted a comment on Wednesday 8th May 2019 10:06am

To have a spell disguised by speaking what seemed to be "natural" dialogue (given the circumstances) and in English is absolutely brilliant! Tom never had a chance against Lily.

gmanfatman posted a comment on Wednesday 8th May 2019 7:19am

this is a nice story

ILikeToRead posted a comment on Wednesday 8th May 2019 2:48am

Fun one-shot and rather unique story concept. Thanks for sharing!

Pbj posted a comment on Wednesday 8th May 2019 1:39am

Excellent short piece. Particularly like the tweak at the end and wonder whether “don’t stick your dick in crazy” might not be another subject worthy of exploring for Harry :)

William Martin posted a comment on Wednesday 8th May 2019 1:10am

Interesting and thought provoking. An interesting idea.

Thank you for writing.

Mistress of Potions posted a comment on Tuesday 7th May 2019 11:21pm

I enjoy a manipulative bearded bastard story as much as the next person, but this was a nice change.

AerynS posted a comment on Tuesday 7th May 2019 10:28pm

"...sticking your dick into crazy." I almost fell off my chair! At least Albus knows Ginny is nuts. This is an interesting prologue. I eagerly await the next chapter.

MatrimKnotai posted a comment on Tuesday 7th May 2019 10:24pm

I love the concept and the execution. Thank you so much for the chapter.