By Clell65619
Reviews
super12 posted a comment on Saturday 4th September 2010 2:10pm
Ok it was funny except the ending that was weird lol
webdoc posted a comment on Friday 16th April 2010 7:28am
BWAHAHAHAHAHAHA
Thanks, I needed that.
dan26 posted a comment on Friday 29th January 2010 8:40pm
A quirky use of a harem pairing if I ever read
Patches posted a comment on Friday 29th January 2010 6:35pm
This is outrageous and hilarious. Quite a different tact for mild mannered Harry Potter, ne Lightning Man! Thanks for adding to the fun. Patches
Rick D Gale posted a comment on Monday 25th January 2010 12:32pm
Of all the different people, I think Neville's the best!
Who would have thought a mild-mannered fat kid would do what everyone else wouldn't?
Thanks for the laughts and welcome to the site.
I look forward to your next adventures,
rdgale
Riegert8 posted a comment on Saturday 23rd January 2010 1:58pm
Very Good story
Chris Espinosa posted a comment on Saturday 23rd January 2010 11:22am
I like it but the last part was unlikely. Not where Neville became a Rorschach-esque character but his inclusion of an innocent person.
Clell65619 replied:
- As I said, that last bit didn't really fit the rest of the Round Robin.
- The Innocent person in question was Neville himself. The scene is sort of an homage to the semi-classic John Byrne Reboot of the Superman character and it's 'first meeting' of Superman and Batman...
myrthe1203 posted a comment on Saturday 19th July 2014 4:58pm