Content Harry Potter Original Young Justice

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Mistress of Potions posted a comment on Saturday 1st October 2016 1:42am

And the moral of the story is: NEVER get Luna Lovegood mad at you.

gtgrouch posted a comment on Saturday 16th May 2015 9:12pm

Anything that makes Draco Malfoy and Ron Weasley stand shoulder-to-shoulder as allies is just too perverse. This is a great little one shot!

gara5289 posted a comment on Wednesday 21st November 2012 4:06pm

And your ending had me cracking up.

dogbertcarroll posted a comment on Friday 21st September 2012 12:55pm

Now this fic I like much better than the one that spawned it!

Zevi posted a comment on Monday 9th July 2012 2:17pm

Nice. Especially the backfired bet at the end. Poor poor Harry. :P

Feno3000 posted a comment on Saturday 21st April 2012 1:33pm

LOL that's great.

The other story was a nice idea, but i hate that they let Riddle go and smashed Harry for something he hadn't any influence about. And they're plain outright stupid as if not 99,99% of humanities women were NOT magical and they all could get their other half somewhere in the muggle world.. after all that would probably be the best anyway to rid them of all that stupid inbreeding and the squibby results thereoff (a.k.a. Slytherin Stupidity syndrome), your version is vastly improved and would almost cry out for a sequel just to show how the witches will go around the continuing attempts of their intellectually challenged castle co-inhabitants to sniff the boy who seduces and at the same time attempt to make the "prophecy" come true... and more than just the prophecy ;)

Darkwoofe posted a comment on Wednesday 25th January 2012 7:17am

LMAO: An interesting way to put an end to Tommy Boy. And in a way, Harry even had a part in it. If the rest of it comes true, I wonder if Harry will live through the first week?

Evan Mayerle posted a comment on Saturday 24th December 2011 2:48pm

::snicker:: At least Harry had the sense to get out before they had the opportunity to take him; Tom definitely hesitated too long. On the other hand, the way things seem to be going, I think that Third-Year Hufflepuff is going to be in for considerable grief from Luna.

BTW, "Gordon Cooper"? How mercurial a name choice; one of the original Seven. Then again, I'm old enough to remember when the first launch too place (yeah, I was in elementary school, but I do remember).

Clell65619 replied:

- Harry had been the Universe's spittoon long enough to recognize what was coming, Tom for all his whining, not so much.

- I was wondering if anyone would notice Gordo... So far just you.

Natalie posted a comment on Thursday 22nd December 2011 11:36pm

lol. brilliant.

Vukk posted a comment on Monday 19th December 2011 5:30am

So Harry beat him by warning him and running while all the guys attacked him in retaliation for letting him get away? I guess that could be considered beating him...

Sandrine Lupin posted a comment on Monday 12th December 2011 7:31am

really amusing,
I like this little one but I'm a little frustrated, I hope there will be a following that explain where Harry went and how he was find maybe another prophecy would be made telling that Harry is dead so all females can return to previous state and a time after Luna will come back with Harry and a baby, and a last prophecy will be made proclaiming that if the baby or his parent is ever intentionnally arm by any one else (to let the possiblity of spanking to raise the child if needed), the world will be doomed... it could be real funny, and with Luna it will look all too believable
but since I am not the author and I can't write english like you, I will hope for another post.
thank you for this one
keep well

Mark Blaine posted a comment on Friday 9th December 2011 11:59pm

This was funny. And reasonable.

jesterod posted a comment on Monday 5th December 2011 6:07pm

i love this the only part that i hate is the fact that it is a one shot this would be awesome as a more full story

PennDragon.Inc posted a comment on Friday 2nd December 2011 4:21pm

HeHe .. this story must go on the list, for brilliant stories.

All I can say is: Tom you poor, poor bastard. And RUN!!! Forest, RUN!!! (erhh I mean. RUN!!! Harry, RUN!!! )

rajvir posted a comment on Thursday 1st December 2011 6:08pm

amaizng story I loved it.

Riegert8 posted a comment on Thursday 1st December 2011 5:26pm

It funny story

Anansii posted a comment on Thursday 1st December 2011 4:58pm

ROFL! Now there's a new addition to Powers Voldie Knows Not. Poor Harry. :)

WhiteElfElder posted a comment on Thursday 1st December 2011 12:47pm

This was great. It just goes to show that some people believe any ole' bull that comes pouring out of someone else's mouth if they put on a good enough show. Harry got screwed over by the magical world again!

Separ posted a comment on Thursday 1st December 2011 12:27pm

Great little story, thank you!

Gaelyn posted a comment on Thursday 1st December 2011 5:35am

Read your inspiration and then your story. Original: Funny and contained. Yours: Funny and could continue as more than a one-shot...with much hilarity to be had.

Loved the end with Luna.