Content Harry Potter Original Young Justice

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Fic Chick posted a comment on Sunday 24th August 2014 12:00pm for Chapter Three

This is cute.

Cassandra30 posted a comment on Monday 6th June 2011 1:28pm for Chapter Three

Totally superb!

super12 posted a comment on Friday 3rd September 2010 11:49pm for Chapter Three

Fantastic story here.
Really interesting idea, but Honestly......Fleur and Ron lol I just can't picture it.....Ron's a pig and Fleur just doesn't seem like the type to like his lack of manners or low IQ lol Good stuff still

Ariel Schnee posted a comment on Tuesday 3rd August 2010 9:53am for Chapter Three

This is really good here!^_^

I like this fanfic now!^_^

Please update this one soon!^_^ ^_^ ^_^

Brightblaze posted a comment on Wednesday 30th June 2010 2:37pm for Chapter Three

interesting story. i really liked how everything kept changing

Jimbocous posted a comment on Thursday 24th June 2010 11:38pm for Chapter Three

Fun stuff, looking forward to more.

Zucht posted a comment on Tuesday 1st June 2010 3:26pm for Chapter Three

Fantastic chapter!!!!!! What's next?

delrusant posted a comment on Tuesday 18th May 2010 12:40pm for Chapter Three

a writing challenge to try to emulate the quantum leap into a HP fanfic, each change bringing a different future but without knowing all the stuff that changed for the one still knowing the original timeline. Will it arbitraly gets to the point of w final face down without collateral damage or will you manage to pull some sort of sense into such a project?

Good luck to achieve the second path.

Dracolych69 posted a comment on Saturday 1st May 2010 1:18am for Chapter Three

Beautiful. Keeping to the "feeling" of both universes. Very nice.

bookworm914 posted a comment on Sunday 25th April 2010 10:03am for Chapter Three

This is great so far.
I wish we could have, in addition to Harry's subjective view of the timeline, an objective report of all the stuff that has been changed and so on, because it's making my head hurt trying to figure out how all of this works, especially how Harry doesn't have a scar and yet Crouch was still needed at Hogwarts (who is the B/GWL that Crouch is trying to kidnap, and why is the kidnap plan still the same after all the changes to the timeline?) Maybe you could post something like that after you finish the story, if you've worked it out?
Thanks for writing this. Very funny. Looking forward to the continuation.

Clell65619 replied:

- Ok, the best explanation for Harry not having the scar, yet Crouch (and Voldemort) still being after him is simple really. In a previous leap Harry was in Peter Pettigrew's body and making things inconvenient for Tom and his boys, until Tom cornered Harry/Peter right where Harry wanted him.

- Prior to the booby trap bomb Harry built set off, Tom got a look inside Peter's head and found... Harry Potter.

- The Bomb converted Tom and his DEs on sight to a fine mist, but Tom hung on due to his horcruxes (horcrui?) He is now (at the time of the Scarless Hufflepuff Harry being made to participate in the Triwizard) a scabby baby thing being tended to by some DE or other while Crouch is conducting that highly convoluted plot to capture the Child of Prophecy... Harry Potter.

Glacialis1 posted a comment on Saturday 13th March 2010 1:10am for Chapter Three

Excellent job, gobbing things up this way, makes for a very interesting read. I think there is so many people that want to fix what happened with the Harry Potter story (especially when he was young) but don't realize the drastic effects it would have had on the rest of the books. If you mess with Harry's life when he was young you would practically have to write a new set of books, with different characters playing the main roles around Harry. Bravo recognizing that! I hope you write more of these!

joeBob posted a comment on Friday 12th March 2010 2:15am for Chapter Three

Interesting.

Rage and Light posted a comment on Thursday 11th March 2010 10:18am for Chapter Three

blood brillent take on the harry potter universe by adding in the quatem leap idea, every jumps changes the story as well as the people who help him in the form of the hologram like al. I also noticed you had sams pattended saying 'oh boy' in every take as well once he realised who he was.

I am wondering if you are going to have him become either voldemort, draco and himself at a younger age

Please go on I love this story

david

darthloki posted a comment on Thursday 11th March 2010 2:21am for Chapter Three

Poor Harry. :D

Awesome.

Anthony May posted a comment on Wednesday 10th March 2010 10:04pm for Chapter Three

Extremely interesting. I can't wait for the next chapter!

dan26 posted a comment on Wednesday 10th March 2010 7:42pm for Chapter Three

Don't you mean "Well, what are you waiting for Sirius? Your Godson Wants to be held"

Riegert8 posted a comment on Wednesday 10th March 2010 4:25pm for Chapter Three

This is a very good chapter

Entilzah posted a comment on Wednesday 10th March 2010 11:09am for Chapter Three

Swiss cheese and a manic downward spiral! Great continuance of this one. And I have no idea where you are going to go with it!

Clell65619 replied:

- I have what I believe to be a totally original ending for Riddle... Which of course means that its only been used five or six hundred times before...