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Wanderer posted a comment on Wednesday 10th August 2016 12:05am for Preparation

He's going to create a construct version of Voldy to attack Thomasina... oh dear.

So, Mr. Umbitch doesn't go to Hogwarts in a teaching capacity, but rather in an assault upon a minor, mind rape of a minor and false imprisonment of a minor... capacity.

Why is it that the he-toad is still alive? M

4rm36uy posted a comment on Monday 16th May 2016 2:13pm for Preparation

What is the idea that he had?!?!?!?!

incogn1to posted a comment on Monday 28th March 2016 7:13pm for Preparation

Love it. I really hope this is continued soon.

JaceBralor posted a comment on Monday 22nd February 2016 12:19am for Preparation

I have just knocked out the existing chapters in the last several hours, loved every second of it, here's hoping you fix our resident Loony next chapter, and it's nice to know that the more things change, the more they stay the same as far as Umbridge is concerned.

arturus posted a comment on Tuesday 1st December 2015 9:14pm for Preparation

It really is an entertaining story. if the next chapter is as good as this I'll happily wait.

Nytefyre posted a comment on Tuesday 4th August 2015 12:16am for Preparation

It's been a long time since I've caught up with this story. During the re-read pronoun troubles became clearer. I know that keeping all the reversed genders and changed names straight is somewhat of a challenge.

Anyway, this new chapter definitely hits some interesting points. The capabilities of the RoR seem to continue to evolve... Somewhat disturbing to think of popping self aware sentient beings into existence for brief periods.

The choice forced on Thubani was cruel, but it would have been nice to see her show some more backbone. Umbridge seems so much more openly deranged here... And yet dangerous in the changes made to Luna.

i definitely look forward to more. Thanks for writing and sharing.

diagonalpumpkin posted a comment on Sunday 12th October 2014 7:46pm for Preparation

I was so excited to see an update for this story (obviously I'm running a little behind in finding it). I'm very glad to know that it is not dead, and will be finished. Yay! Thank you for the great chapter and I can hardly wait for the next one.

Princess Fictoria posted a comment on Sunday 5th October 2014 1:14am for Preparation

Oooh, I so very much hope that Dumbledore is able to get the cure for Luna out of the little toad... Otherwise, she needs to tell Harry what happened, ASAP! Because I think Harry could get him to talk... loudly... intersperced with much screaming to be sure... but he would talk!

Lambdaman78 posted a comment on Sunday 21st September 2014 11:16am for Preparation

Thanks a lot for continueing this story!

Lee Dickie posted a comment on Saturday 20th September 2014 5:47pm for Preparation

A well written set of threats and paybacks.

Patches posted a comment on Saturday 20th September 2014 5:23pm for Preparation

This is bad. I am so sorry Luna has been damaged and doesn't remember her feelings for Harry. Umbridge is more horrible than I have ever seen before. What idea has Orestes come up with? I hope they can restore Luna memory. What did Fudge mean about Umbridge destroying one of their means to end the war? I look forward to more of this story. Thanks for writing.

I really hope you do complete this story before 2020. That is more than 5 years away. I know I read the earlier chapters before but it has been a while. Thanks again for writing. p

Ratboy posted a comment on Saturday 20th September 2014 2:14am for Preparation

Yes, 4 years and I really hope it isn't 2020 before it is doe :) I reread the complete story to remind me what was going on and I must say it is just as good now as it was the first time I read it.

Evan Mayerle posted a comment on Friday 19th September 2014 9:50pm for Preparation

Okay, that was a nasty move by Umbridge and 'twill be quite interesting to see if the mental effects can be reversed. An interesting chapter and it should be most interesting to see where matters go from here.

takon65 posted a comment on Friday 19th September 2014 4:38am for Preparation

Thank you for an enjoyable story. This has to be the second most innovative I have read. Don't worry Clell, you have the title locked on the inovative one too, Inspector 13.

Chessicfayth posted a comment on Friday 19th September 2014 1:37am for Preparation

I have been waiting sooooo long for this update. I'd given up hope lol. Thanks for the chapter!

Evil cliffhanger with Luna is evil. And a cliffhanger.

But seriously, thanks for the work. I really enjoyed it, and the inspector 13 fic you posted recently. A pleasure to read.

Riegert8 posted a comment on Thursday 18th September 2014 10:51pm for Preparation

I feel sorry for Harry that he get arrested and lose Luna at the same time, Ok maybe he did not lose Luna. But there a chance that Luna will not return to normal, well normal for her

Kara posted a comment on Thursday 18th September 2014 10:26pm for Preparation

Hooray! An update! Excellent!

And the Dark Lady is indeed most reasonable ...