Princess Fictoria posted a comment on Friday 22nd June 2012 2:44am for Chapter Three - Negotiations

I get goose bumps reading each new chapter. I love how powerful the elder sect are in comparison to the wand users... I also love how the addition of Harry seems to have softened Darin's abject refusal to accept that aspect of his wife's familial skills. Your doctor bombay was marvelous... I could just see it as it happened... especially the part about lifting his foot into the air.

Thank you for your hard work entertaining us... we do appreciate it. I can hardly wait until Voldie tries whatever scheme he comes up with to try to 'get' the power the elder sect has.

Infin1x posted a comment on Friday 22nd June 2012 2:24am for Chapter Three - Negotiations

Ah the bliss of being truly delusional. Poor Voldemort didn't hear a sungle word of that speech except "power." It's going to be very funny to see his delusions of adequacy be destroyed. You are doing some excellent work here. I am really glad to see something a bit longer from you as much as I love your cracktastic shorts.

LongLivedOne posted a comment on Friday 22nd June 2012 1:51am for Chapter Three - Negotiations

Stoopid man... he just doesn't learn!!!

Was also good to see both Snape and Dmumb's on the backfoot.

Patches posted a comment on Friday 22nd June 2012 1:48am for Chapter Three - Negotiations

This is a great story. What a powerful Harry! He has deffinitely made an impact on Hogwarts. Uncle Sal welcoming him to Slytherin House was great. Harry standing up for the other kids in Slytherin that aren't concidered pureblood was great. Standing up for Neville against Draco and putting Draco down at every meeting was great. I love the way that Harry "saved" Hermione and the girl troll. Giving the troll a dress she liked was priceless. I really like the way that Harry deals with everyone and now he has given Voldemort and chance to redeam himself but of course Voldemort is too stupid to take the chance. I look forward to more of this story. Thanks for writing. pms

Zamia posted a comment on Friday 22nd June 2012 12:46am for Chapter Three - Negotiations

So bloody believable. Loved the yarn with Uncle Sal. Looking forward to seeing what he does with the puss. Maybe Harry can instill some logic to the inhabitants of Hogwarts. Very enjoyable. Cheers.

Z

Gioia posted a comment on Friday 22nd June 2012 12:38am for Chapter Three - Negotiations

There was so much fun in one chapter, it's rather diffiult to pick my favorite moment! But Harry's converation with Slytherin's portrait is high on that list. Great work! Thank you!

Anansii posted a comment on Friday 22nd June 2012 12:37am for Chapter Three - Negotiations

Y'know, I think the rest of this might well be a lot more fun if Harry never DID see Voldie again, though the latter appears, alas, to be feeling suicidal. Ah well, Go Harry!!

Agramahad posted a comment on Friday 22nd June 2012 12:24am for Chapter Three - Negotiations

I don't visit this site all that often, maybe once every other month. This chapter is almost the perfect example of my reasons why.

You don't guzzle a bottle of 100 year old whiskey like a teenager on a Friday night, you pour yourself a glass every now and then. You savour it. You make it last as long as possible because you never know when you might find something so exquisite ever again.

That being said, I find myself hoping for the swift conclusion to this wonderful story. Afterall, who doesn't want to binge every now and then.

:)

GinnyLover posted a comment on Friday 22nd June 2012 12:13am for Chapter Three - Negotiations

I really like this fic. Way too long between updates though :(

ZanyMuggle posted a comment on Thursday 21st June 2012 11:27pm for Chapter Three - Negotiations

I rarely review your work, Clell. It's all so damn good that I can't do it justice. But you've really outdone your self with this piece (the whole story, not this chapter). This fanfic oozes Bewitched, probably moreso than the original series! I had been blase about the series for decades now, but now I'm itching to go watch the old episodes. And you made the HP universe fit in seamlessly.

One of my favorite ironies you written is that the least of the Elders - the bumbling Aunt Clara - represents the pinnacle of cognitive ability to the wand-wavers.

Thanks for writing, Clell. You've provided me hours of relaxation and amusement. (And your stories are good too!) :)

Willie Merryman posted a comment on Thursday 21st June 2012 11:05pm for Chapter Three - Negotiations

I really do love this story and I am not really sure why but there is just something about it that makes me come and reread it every few months just so I can laugh at what I picture from the movies of Harry Potter and the original Bewitched.

Anyway I know most authors would like to have feedback and while I can't really critique your grammar or spelling worth a damn I just wanted you to know that I really do like your stories.

Willie

ladyimmortal posted a comment on Thursday 21st June 2012 10:38pm for Chapter Three - Negotiations

Holy canoly that chapter was great - and hilarious too.

The whole part with the troll? SOOOO FUNNY!

I love this story! This update totally made my week! Thanks Clell!

Riegert8 posted a comment on Thursday 21st June 2012 10:37pm for Chapter Three - Negotiations

Very good chapter

jalva200 posted a comment on Thursday 21st June 2012 9:44pm for Chapter Three - Negotiations

lov it!

keep it up

Greg Johnson posted a comment on Thursday 21st June 2012 9:42pm for Chapter Three - Negotiations

Great chapter. A lot of fun to read. Can't wait for more to this story.

Thank you for posting.

Katsuhito posted a comment on Thursday 21st June 2012 9:28pm for Chapter Three - Negotiations

Yea, and update! :) That's an interesting twist - Voldie getting his body back 3 years early. Hmm, obviously, Harry won't have to deal with the Sirius hunt in third year, but will Lucius still plant the diary on someone next year? And will we see any more of 1st year now that the main (canon) plot has been resolved? And will Harry still play quiditch? And...

Well, there's a lot more questions, obviously. I can't wait to have them answered. Well, I can wait for a bit, but not too long. ;)

Anyway, I really have no concrit or anything for this chapter - it's up to your usual excellent standards of prose, humor, and (light) drama I'd expect from what amounts to a super!Harry story. What's really interesting me in this one is all the character interactions. Good job there.

Michael10 posted a comment on Thursday 21st June 2012 8:28pm for Chapter Three - Negotiations

and here we go with Voldie not listening and he's going to be crushed. by Adam or Tabby. Harry's making friends and can't wait to see when Hermione learns he's doing both magic and mundane school.

Malfoy is going to end up with his bottom lip pulled over his head and made to swallow if he keeps it up.

keep up the good work

Mathew McCrillis posted a comment on Thursday 21st June 2012 8:06pm for Chapter Three - Negotiations

Loved the new chapter, hope there is less nagging in your future.

Cheers!