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Wanderer posted a comment on Wednesday 3rd January 2018 11:36pm for Chapter Twenty-One - Year Four – Summer Vacation

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Neville is the only the seventh of my students to discover the concept entirely on his own, and the first in most of two hundred years."
The Alchemist looked on with approval as the combined Elemental submitted to the boy. "Yes, I expect great things from young Mr. Longbottom."
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So Cool!
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"Bombing from orbit isn't the answer for everything," Harry objected.
"It's a good answer for a whole lot of things," Tony disagreed. "And you make a good point; a dedicated satellite over Hogwarts would make me feel better, and that satellite having a few precision kinetic packages would make me feel a lot better."
"There is nothing precise about orbital bombardment," Harry sighed.
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I was laughing so much with this!
Gotta love the idea of Franklin Jr. & Hermione :)
Lockheed!!? Ohs Noes... poor Harry! lol

Nytefyre posted a comment on Tuesday 4th August 2015 11:45pm for Chapter Twenty-One - Year Four – Summer Vacation

Well, it's good to catch up with this story. I like the summer visits - they're both interesting and relaxing ways to see our protagonists interact. Hermione and Franklin is quite an interesting coupling. I wonder how Harry can keep Lockheed at Hogwarts... And how that will affect his experience with the Tournament.

I look forward to more to come. Thanks for writing and sharing.

slickrcbd posted a comment on Sunday 29th March 2015 10:59pm for Chapter Twenty-One - Year Four – Summer Vacation

I just reread this, and noticed the part about a KEW being given a dedicated tasking over Hogwarts. I was thinking it would be cool if Harry gets in a situation like the canon timeline where Voldemort and all his Death Eaters are gathered together, makes his escape and activates the sattelite at the same time, so seconds after he portkeys away they are all obliterated by orbital bombardment, a power Voldenmort who left the muggle world before the atomic bomb knows nothing about,

At least you have set up a good omake.

Tenchifew posted a comment on Monday 9th February 2015 2:16pm for Chapter Twenty-One - Year Four – Summer Vacation

Great chapter.

The tournament should be... interesting.

Thank you for writing.

mwinter posted a comment on Sunday 25th January 2015 2:26pm for Chapter Twenty-One - Year Four – Summer Vacation

Been a while. Thanks for the update. Awaiting more.

Jadzia7667 posted a comment on Saturday 24th January 2015 10:00pm for Chapter Twenty-One - Year Four – Summer Vacation

Yay for a new chapter. LOL @ Franklin and Hermione - it's a good match. Can Lockheed please flambe' Dumbledore's beard off?

GBTtown posted a comment on Saturday 24th January 2015 8:37pm for Chapter Twenty-One - Year Four – Summer Vacation

Lonnnnnnnng awaited but good.

Riegert8 posted a comment on Saturday 24th January 2015 7:50pm for Chapter Twenty-One - Year Four – Summer Vacation

Interesting chapter that Harry going keep a eye on some kid

Davideg posted a comment on Saturday 24th January 2015 5:23pm for Chapter Twenty-One - Year Four – Summer Vacation

thank you for sharing another fantastic chapter as well as for all the time and effort put in to it please continue to update as life allows

Glacialis1 posted a comment on Saturday 24th January 2015 4:26pm for Chapter Twenty-One - Year Four – Summer Vacation

Another really fun chapter to read. I appreciate that you didn't bore us with the details of a shopping trip and stayed to relevant plot points of the Canon. You're pretty much a genius.