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Wanderer posted a comment on Monday 1st January 2018 9:21pm for That will Leave a mark.

Hmmm, Albus's reaction seems a bit... over the top. He is well aware of Agatha's capabilities, not to mention her affiliation / reason for being there at all would be for Harry. It is unlike him to be so blatantly threatening let alone so emotionally out of control. Past that the chapter was lots of fun, and definitely gives a glimpse into just how powerful - and yet not so in control - young Harry is. M

Ronjon posted a comment on Monday 25th December 2017 3:18am for That will Leave a mark.

A-HA!! Now I understand how I thought there was a separate story since I could remember bits of his life with Tony from 5 years to 11. Most inventive!!

Wolf550e posted a comment on Tuesday 8th June 2010 6:53pm for That will Leave a mark.

"would loose this youngster" - lose

"Where there the back" - remove "there"

M. F. Enright posted a comment on Saturday 5th June 2010 7:27am for That will Leave a mark.

excellent story, so far. thank you!!

Riegert8 posted a comment on Thursday 4th February 2010 9:05pm for That will Leave a mark.

This is a very good chapter