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Wanderer posted a comment on Monday 7th December 2015 2:32am for Year Three - Autumn Term

WOW, well that's a hard left turn! Voldiewhatsit should have been so lucky!

I had to look up the movie Misery jic 'Mavis' was the nurse from S Kings disturbing work, but alas, no such luck for the rat :)

Definitely a rough place to quit for now, but I look forward to catching up tomorrow and hope that you are back in fine writing form for the remainder of your very enjoyable tale! M

Shadowalker12 posted a comment on Saturday 13th July 2013 10:53pm for Year Three - Autumn Term

I like this story and your style of writing a lot.

It has been a while but is there any chance of an update or have you finished with this story for some reason?

Nancy Austin posted a comment on Sunday 30th June 2013 4:50pm for Year Three - Autumn Term

Thank you so much for this absorbing story. I made myself do some yard work before I sat down to read. Sooner than I would like, I hit the end. Bummer! Hopefully you will have time to post another chapter soon.

Warmonger posted a comment on Wednesday 19th June 2013 7:17pm for Year Three - Autumn Term

Update please, god this was interesting, are you planning on incorporating events from Avengers or Iron man 2 or 3 in?

Clell65619 replied:

No.  The story was fully plotted out before Iron Man 1 came out, and I'm not changing anything significant in it.

Joeblow8579 posted a comment on Monday 20th May 2013 6:53am for Year Three - Autumn Term

This story is interesting. The portrayals of the Marvel universe characters are pretty good, and I like the by-play between the magical authorities in Britain and the comic book types.

What I very much DON'T like is the various characters that are unrecognizeable from the HP canon - most notably Dumbledore. The version of Dumbledore here is simply too far from canon. He is completely uncaring, callous, supremely arrogant, and appears to be totally amoral. He is also a bumbling fool. All in all, he brings what could be a very interesting story fully into the realm of the absurd. Why even bother writing his character if its going to bear no resemblance to the canon one?

Alice Zecco posted a comment on Sunday 13th January 2013 11:32am for Year Three - Autumn Term

This has been one of the most entertaining stories I have read in a while. Though, I am not a big fan of "super hero" thing, and don't know a lot about the history, your story is a great read. I love that you provide back ground material on the characters of those of us who are not "in the know."

Glacialis1 posted a comment on Wednesday 2nd January 2013 9:24pm for Year Three - Autumn Term

Another fantastic chapter! I like Harry's use of logic to point out the oddity of visiting the Shrieking shack as a fun thing to do in Hogsmeade!

Clell65619 replied:

Glad you like it.  As far as the Shrieking Shack, the whole idea of a people who routinely speak with ghosts and other spirits being frightened of a haunted house never made much sense to me.

sylvelle posted a comment on Wednesday 2nd January 2013 1:37am for Year Three - Autumn Term

So when do we get to see more.. I'm really into this one and I don't like crossover's generally.

Clell65619 replied:

- Working on Chapter 19 now, because of the cliffie...

Patches posted a comment on Monday 31st December 2012 11:20pm for Year Three - Autumn Term

This is a fantastic chapter. I had to read the whole story again to get caught up. Sorry it took so long. It is great that Harry had Neville over to his house during the summer. The stay at longbottom manor was educational to Harry. I'm glad Harry is getting to know Tracey. She has a tough road ahead of her. I loved the part where Tony told Dumbledore he had better notify the other parents about their children missing.. He needs to be told what he should be doing sooner than later. It is terrible that the Kree may have the kids. What are they doing to Harry? I look forward to more of this story. Soon I hope. Thanks for writing. pms

Riegert8 posted a comment on Thursday 27th December 2012 10:03pm for Year Three - Autumn Term

This is a good chapter

Davideg posted a comment on Thursday 27th December 2012 4:06pm for Year Three - Autumn Term

thank you for sharing another fantastic chapter please continue to update a.s.a.l.a.

kilrathae posted a comment on Thursday 27th December 2012 2:30pm for Year Three - Autumn Term

Awesome new chapter. Love the story and was totally blown away when I received the notice that a new chapter was up. Highlight of my day. Keep up the great work and I look forward to all your updates for this and your other works.

lancelw posted a comment on Thursday 27th December 2012 10:39am for Year Three - Autumn Term

ty for the update. looking forward to more. Love this story. again thank you for the time you took to wright it, and for sharing it with us.

gadriam posted a comment on Thursday 27th December 2012 6:49am for Year Three - Autumn Term

I'm taking an insane amount of pride in putting the alchemic pieces together without googling a single thing. I wear my Geek merit badge with pride..=)

Thank you for the continuation of this most engaging story.

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Mathew McCrillis posted a comment on Thursday 27th December 2012 5:35am for Year Three - Autumn Term

Great chapter, thanks for the fun story!

Cheers!

Fanboyimus Prime posted a comment on Thursday 27th December 2012 12:35am for Year Three - Autumn Term

Er if this fic gets to Year 5 can it please have Cable as the DADA.

Fanboyimus Prime posted a comment on Thursday 27th December 2012 12:34am for Year Three - Autumn Term

Interesting. I wonder what the Kree want with Harry. I do wonder if Operation Galactic Storm had happened in this story as the Kree would have one major bone to pick with Iron Man and the Avengers.

And if this covers Year 5 can you please have Cable as the DADA?

Clell65619 replied:

- Cable isn't going to appear in the fic.  I"m keeping the X-people to a minimum.

 

- Hank McCoy has made his appearances and will again (He's vital to the end game), Franklin is attending Xaviers to get control of his powers, and Kitty Pryde will make an appearance 4th year, but beyond that, no Xers.