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Wanderer posted a comment on Tuesday 2nd January 2018 1:43am for Year Two Christmas

I really enjoyed the descriptions of the various team projects, they made a lot of sense and it was fun how you used the various faction meetings / family planning to convey them.

Stalk and capture your own mate lol, great stuff!

Fic Chick posted a comment on Wednesday 12th July 2017 8:01pm for Year Two Christmas

I adore the second to last paragraph in this chapter.

Wanderer posted a comment on Monday 7th December 2015 12:05am for Year Two Christmas

"So this visit would be to the New World?": Augusta Longbottom to perfection :)

"...You’re going to have to stalk and capture your mate just like everyone else.": Goblin executive to perfection :D

Fun chapter, filled with the broader scope of the characters, very nicely done. M

Machelle posted a comment on Thursday 10th June 2010 10:37pm for Year Two Christmas

Too many things to love about this chapter, so I will just hit the highlights:

Love Lucius' mask - is it an ode to "Phantom of the Opera" or a wonderfully ironic twist on his Death Eater mask? I think I prefer the latter...what he once wore to intimidate and scare others is now forced upon him. Well done on the revenge scene earlier. The idea that he doesn't "know" who hurt him though he knows the why should keep him on pins and needles for a while.

Secondly, I adore Harry's teenage angst scene with his Dad. Well done. Tony doesn't lie to him but helps his with a gentle dose of reality.

Finally, I admire the way you can tell a scene from multiple perspectives and still keep the identity of one or more of your characters under wraps. Bravo.

tw posted a comment on Thursday 29th April 2010 9:02pm for Year Two Christmas

Love it! Live it! Stalk it! :P Wonderful chapter.

Hytekrednek posted a comment on Thursday 18th March 2010 12:11am for Year Two Christmas

I have to say that this is definitely one of the better Harry Potter stories that involves another Universe. I also like that you are making the Supers as supporting roles and can see where you are coming from with the little part about Thor kicking Voldies but. I look forward to the chapters still to come and wondering who you are leaning towards for a pairing to Harry? Hermione and Padma or one of the Marvel OC's????

Clell65619 replied:

- I'm not planning on pairing Harry with anyone in the sense of 'soul mate' or 'found true love while still in school and married for life twenty minutes following the graduation ceremony'. Harry and Co are kids and will remain kids throughout the story.

- There will be experimentation of the sort that goes on everywhere that people with 'tab A' are around other people with 'slot B' but I'm not planning on Harry finding the love of his life.

- Hermione thought...

dimriver posted a comment on Tuesday 16th March 2010 5:00pm for Year Two Christmas

This is a fun story. The OWL project is a weird concept asking 12 year olds to start planning to invent something new. I just can't picture most being any more motivated than Parvati. Anyway great story.

coronal posted a comment on Tuesday 9th March 2010 2:22pm for Year Two Christmas

OK, the entire Cub Scouts part of this chapter had me reeling with laughter. Just awesome. quid pro quo

Clell65619 replied:

- Not so much 'invent' as put some original thought into a project. As stated in Story, having one's project fail to meet the goals set out doesn't mean that the project gets a failing grade... It's the methodology that's being emphasized.

- If something new and useful is created in this, that's just gravy.

Jonez227 posted a comment on Monday 8th March 2010 12:35pm for Year Two Christmas

this is the first marvel/harry potter sotry i've come across that i've actually read more than one page. very creative, using mutants to fill in magical history instead. keep up the good work.

KSK posted a comment on Friday 5th March 2010 8:57am for Year Two Christmas

I have very much enjoyed this story. I am very anxious to see the next set of postings. Can you give us an idea when the rest of year 2 will be done, and the other years through 7 will be coming out?? One post a week, perhaps?? A Month??

A very grateful reader!

auroramizu42 posted a comment on Thursday 4th March 2010 3:56am for Year Two Christmas

truly excellent example of a 'what if?' i am enjoying it greatly more to come soon i hope. great work


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svella posted a comment on Monday 1st March 2010 1:00am for Year Two Christmas

Hi Deluded Musings,

Great story this is one of fav's. I think you are doing a great job with it.

Could we get say weekly updates?

Hahahahahah

00_Knight posted a comment on Friday 19th February 2010 8:42am for Year Two Christmas

Please tell me you intend to finish this story! Its amazing!

You honestly can't let it end here, it would be reason enough to bring hell upon earth itself! Though, admittedly, if you were to screw up the rest of the story it would cast a bad omen on what you've already written up to this point. So damned if you don't, and damned if you do it poorly! =D

Loved the Thor scene! The rest of it has been very enjoyable!

Hope you decide to update it.

Clell65619 replied:

Technomage is a work in progress. Not abandoned, I'm just a bit busy with RL and a few other irons in the fire.

TangledPencils posted a comment on Thursday 18th February 2010 1:40pm for Year Two Christmas

I'm enjoying this story very much, please continue soon.

Deborahsu posted a comment on Tuesday 16th February 2010 7:42am for Year Two Christmas

Interesting story so far! I'll keep reading if you'll keep writing! :-)

Graup posted a comment on Wednesday 10th February 2010 11:43am for Year Two Christmas

I have truly enjoyed your story over the last few days. It is a refreshing change, and has been most interesting.

It has been quite a while since such a quality work within Potterverse. It is refreshing and delightful.

Please keep up the story if you can as I would like to see what else you have in store.

As well, if you decide not to continue, would you please mark the story as abandoned.

Thanks again for the great read.

Graup_Hagrid

KSK posted a comment on Tuesday 9th February 2010 6:52pm for Year Two Christmas

Great story! I really enjoy the easy flow of the marvel heros, yet the solitarity of the HP Universe. Question: will you bring in the X-Men, or Spider Man, Hulk to this story??

I am interested to see how Padma, Hermoine, Luna, and Daphne will get involved now that HP can't get Lightspeed.

Pls write another 15 chapters quickly!!

Clell65619 replied:

- Spiderman will make an appearance in the next chapter... sort of. He will also be around during the summer before 4th year.

- Some of the x-people will be making an appearance, but not as a team. There may be an appearance by Wolverine the summer before 3rd year if a scene I'm working on comes together. Kitty Pryde will make an appearance 4th year.

Bernd Jacobitz posted a comment on Saturday 6th February 2010 8:25pm for Year Two Christmas

So brilliantly funny.
I am not much into super heroes but this story is so good.
It would be a waste to abandon it.

Evan Mayerle posted a comment on Friday 5th February 2010 9:44pm for Year Two Christmas

*snicker* That last line's quite the kicker to end on. I'll admit that I do wonder who Daphne's male cousin is and what his interests are here. ALong the same lines, 'twill be most interesting to see which witch was being aimed toward Harry Potter (not that it'll necessarily work, he's not got your usual wizarding "clueless" background but has seen plenty of women set their sights on his dad). Continuing, I wonder what Sirius will make of it when he finds out about Tony Stark's "alter ego" and what *he* does; I'm rather looking forward to the surprise that generates and what interactions Sirius, Tony, and Remus might have, both in general and with regard to the young wizard they all think well of.

Dale Dietzman posted a comment on Friday 5th February 2010 8:48pm for Year Two Christmas

"I’m sorry Mr. Stark, but there will be no easy way to a mate for you. The Potter family hasn’t contracted for marriage since before I came onto your account, more than one hundred and fifty years ago. You’re going to have to stalk and capture your mate just like everyone else."

Oh, my! "The Stalking and Capture of Hermione Granger (or Ginny Weasley, or Luna Lovegood)
What a Chapter title...or Story Title!