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Wanderer posted a comment on Tuesday 2nd January 2018 2:17am for Year Two - Winter Term

Is there anyone called the Magician? LMAO!

Then the locals show up and they are all "meh" ... laughed through that whole scene, great job!

Well that ended horrifically! M

strandale posted a comment on Wednesday 14th March 2012 9:44pm for Year Two - Winter Term

Sirius needs an archnemesis. It is only proper.

hholidays posted a comment on Tuesday 7th June 2011 11:49pm for Year Two - Winter Term

Harry presented his father with a long suffering look. "Oh, yes. The car you ‘helped’ with broke the freaking sound barrier and buried itself three inches into a concrete wall."

Another great line!

Fenris Ulf posted a comment on Thursday 30th September 2010 4:06pm for Year Two - Winter Term

This story is great I love your blending together of the different universes they seem like they belong together in your story. Tony and Harry talking about an ironman movie made me laugh expecially considering the ironman 2 movie is sitting next to my PC as we speak to watch a little later today.


Thanks for writing can't wait to see more from you

Rob

PottersMuse posted a comment on Thursday 23rd September 2010 4:13pm for Year Two - Winter Term

I'm loving this story, and hoping you'll keep it up! :) any chance you'll update?? Please?? *fluttering eyelashes* pretty please with sugar on top?

Clell65619 replied:

I'm working on Chapter 16 now, 600 words in.

Chris McFadden posted a comment on Saturday 21st August 2010 11:40pm for Year Two - Winter Term

Re: the glitchy binary counter
For some reason, I'm reminded of the Rifftrax for Tron, where one of the riffers said that Bit had a third setting for 'meh'.

vhemacha posted a comment on Sunday 18th July 2010 7:01pm for Year Two - Winter Term

I really like this chapter! I especially love Sirius' way of introducing himself to Tony Stark. It was very unique and apt. I hope you update soon! This is one my new favorite stories!

svella posted a comment on Friday 18th June 2010 12:23am for Year Two - Winter Term

I've been following this story and await your next chapter with baited breath....

Anansii posted a comment on Monday 14th June 2010 2:56am for Year Two - Winter Term

Sirius does Superhero... Love it! I'm glad you're continuing this tale and hope you keep it up.

Fresh posted a comment on Friday 11th June 2010 7:19am for Year Two - Winter Term

What a fun chapter!

Machelle posted a comment on Thursday 10th June 2010 10:38pm for Year Two - Winter Term

Love it...Sirius and Tony are a deadly combination to womankind.

Machelle posted a comment on Thursday 10th June 2010 10:29pm for Year Two - Winter Term

I love Voldy-squirrel!LOL I can see Harry accepting his error with grace,humility, and anger at himself for not seeing an obvious error - well obvious to a genuius, anyway.

Jim_xinu posted a comment on Wednesday 9th June 2010 6:51pm for Year Two - Winter Term

Great to see a new chapter, I enjoyed it. Thanks for sharing with us.

SassyFrass posted a comment on Wednesday 9th June 2010 4:06pm for Year Two - Winter Term

I absolutely loved Sirius's card!

Wynter posted a comment on Sunday 6th June 2010 11:14pm for Year Two - Winter Term

Voldemort! The amazing, horrifying, terrible, insane, furry, cute and all around nasty being eater of all things cute and fluffy....................... SQUIRREL!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Christopher Estep posted a comment on Sunday 6th June 2010 6:45pm for Year Two - Winter Term

Seems that things have gotten Seriously Twisted for all the adversaries - Lucius is laying low, Sirius pays a visit to Tony Stark (and sends a robbery attempt pear-shaped at a charity event he attends with the billionaire), and poor Dumbles is laid low by the first inventions coming out of the Stark/Patil/Granger consortium. (I did *not* use the name *Potter* on purpose, as Harry calls himself Harry *Stark*; therefore, Stark/Patil/Granger.) And a poor dog is the last to glimpse the infamous Voldi-Squirrel!

tangentsferret posted a comment on Saturday 5th June 2010 9:21pm for Year Two - Winter Term

OK, I've read stories where the Quirrel/Voldemort fusion is referred to as "Quirrelmort", but this is the first time I can recall seeing the actual appearance of "Squirrelmort".

Well done.

Hey, what would have happened if "Squirrelmort" had met up with Squirrel Girl?

dg Fry posted a comment on Saturday 5th June 2010 8:43pm for Year Two - Winter Term

I'm really glad to see you continuing this one. Keep up the good work.

GOing to be interesting to see where Padma goes with the counter.

Toran posted a comment on Saturday 5th June 2010 4:25pm for Year Two - Winter Term

Nice chapter. Harry's logic when teaching the other children is hurting my head though. How can he get it soo wrong? after all. In binary 0011 = 3. Binary is also almost always done in series of 4.

Clell65619 replied:

- Harry's lesson is on basic binary notation and math. When he said 'one and one' he wasn't referencing logic, rather the basic math expression for addition, so 'one and one' equals 'one plus one'.

- When it comes to how one 'reads' binary notation depends entirely upon the school of binary you are first taught. I was introduced to Octal, and three digit binary comprehension a week before they brought Hex and four digit binary comprehension into the lessons. Even today it is quite common for direct front panel input to a mainframe to be in Octal referenced binary.

00_Knight posted a comment on Saturday 5th June 2010 1:16pm for Year Two - Winter Term

Oh Snaps! After reading your reviews, and your reply to Snaq, That is one of the most hilarious things to see! Voldesquirrel! Poor dog.....