Harry Potter and the Marriage Contracts
Changes
By Clell65619
Reviews
Riegert8 posted a comment on Friday 19th March 2010 7:24pm for Changes
This is a good chapter
I like the talk that Harry had with Justin
It was sad that Remus told Tonks everything he did to the Potters, It not much of a shock that he was kicked out. Remus made some choices that he thought was the thing to do, but at the end the price for those choices cost him everything.
It sad that Harry thought that his relationship with Daphne was over, I thought that Tracey was a little too Harsh with Harry. Harry is selfish for turning down the contract, but if Harry accept the Contract he would still be the bad guy in Tracey eyes. But I am glad that in the end that Daphne was saved
You can say that Cyrus Greengrass is a brave and stupid man, Cyrus sould have known that Alastor Moody is really unbalance and only going to be push so far before he snapped. But Cyrus want power so much that he will do anything to get it, even it mean the lost of his daughters.
Zamia posted a comment on Friday 19th March 2010 6:59pm for Changes
Well thought out and described. Always liked Moody's frayed edges. Top read. Cheers.
Z
takon65 posted a comment on Friday 19th March 2010 6:24pm for Changes
Awesome story! This isn't the end is it?
Clell65619 replied:
= No, one more chapter.
Anansii posted a comment on Friday 19th March 2010 5:05pm for Changes
And we can give Harry one for creativity. I'd just figured he was going to sign the contract then, but backdating everything was much better. Also I love the various tales of Voldemort's demise - I suspect what really happened may prove an anticlimax. Then again, I don't know if I care if I ever find out. :)
Clell65619 replied:
- Hey, he stood there in front of the Wizengamot and told them that it was a case of Line Theft and Fraud, and then proceeded to commit both.
- An honest guy Harry is...
TxA_GunFighter posted a comment on Thursday 17th January 2013 8:12pm for Changes