Content Harry Potter Original Young Justice

Reviews

mysuv1 posted a comment on Thursday 28th December 2017 6:53pm for Recovery

this was cute but dont like Ginny being bad

irishbloodinmyveins posted a comment on Friday 9th January 2015 7:44pm for Recovery

Well, once again a truly brilliant story. I have never bothered to read any stories that were not harry/Ginny (as I am a bit of a whore for them lol 😁) untill this one and I'm glad I did. It all worked brilliantly well done! Thank you for many pleasurable hours reading.

firedawg posted a comment on Saturday 26th April 2014 6:23am for Recovery

Great story and thank you for a pleasent escape from reality. I felt the story was a little harsh on Lupin but thats the veauty of imagination. Thanks for writing a great story, well done.

TxA_GunFighter posted a comment on Thursday 17th January 2013 10:50pm for Recovery

Really great story. Loved it.

gunny

sisyphus1967 posted a comment on Friday 20th July 2012 10:20pm for Recovery

That was awesome! Thank you and write more! I particularly enjoyed the stories they told Dumbledore and the interaction Neville and Harry had. Brilliant!

Richard6154 posted a comment on Tuesday 3rd January 2012 3:41am for Recovery

Just reread this as Chemprof mention it in his new story. Still a great read. :)
Thanks for sharing

gadriam posted a comment on Friday 4th March 2011 8:09am for Recovery

I'm not sure whether i've reviewed this before, but i just have to say that the entire work is spectacular, but your little Ginny's Wedding-snippet is mindblowingly fantastic. Damn, it's a stand-alone short story on its own, or it could also work as a fantastic prologue. It just struck me just how brilliant that little piece is.
You Rock!
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- Glad you liked it.

computer5450 posted a comment on Wednesday 17th November 2010 1:25pm for Recovery

very good and thank you, loved it.

Abraxan posted a comment on Saturday 9th October 2010 6:25pm for Recovery

That was quite a fun read! And what a great way to do away with Moldyshorts!

Abraxan

BillyMac posted a comment on Thursday 23rd September 2010 9:52am for Recovery

Many, many things I love about this story. . .Harry & Neville's comedy team relationship. . .storyline about Dumbeldore's quest for the account of Voldemort's demise. . .the "anointing" of Dumbledore's grave. . .and last but not least, a happy ending. Most everybody gets whats coming to them. One thing I don't remember - Was Hermione ever told that Dumbledore's spell was the cause of her strong attraction to Ron?

Dalwyn posted a comment on Monday 23rd August 2010 1:21pm for Recovery

Awesome story, and a wonderful play on both Manipulative!Dumbles and on Marriage Contracts (taken separately). In one of the initial scenes I had a crazy idea - you had the Longbottoms warning Harry against accidentally accepting an offer, but what if he hadn't had that tutoring? With over 3000 offers, accidentally accepting even 1% of them could have been fairly amusing.

I'm no Ginny fan, but her final scene had me feeling just a tiny bit sorry for her. And I loved all the stories on how they took care of Moldy, especially the first, which was perhaps the least likely of them all. :)

One of the very few negatives for me: I was quite surprised that Harry didn't take moRon to task for his treatment of Hermione. Sure, at the immediate moment, taking care of Hermione was the priority. But later? He is willing to spend a dozen decades in Azkaban if anyone hurts Hermione, yet didn't do anything to Ron, and there weren't any "should I kill him?" ruminations or anything. It didn't ring true.

But again, fantastic story, thanks for writing.

sarahgirl12384 posted a comment on Sunday 13th June 2010 3:52pm for Recovery

I love this story!

goku90504 posted a comment on Wednesday 21st April 2010 7:47am for Recovery

Oh damn good end for the dark tosser!! love the story

sejones posted a comment on Thursday 25th March 2010 10:43pm for Recovery

The ardvarks! my eyes! At the aquarium I volunteer at we have a tank with horseshoe crabs that is very popular. Even though the crabs are all males, sometimes they get a bit enthusiastic. I tell the adults the crabs are confused. The little kids get told they're playing piggy-back.

I read this on fanfiction and enjoyed it there. I love the extended ending, especially Tom's punishment and Dumbledore's graveside remembrance.

Thanks for sharing.

Wolfric posted a comment on Tuesday 23rd March 2010 11:32pm for Recovery

Well I didn't notice many changes and only two typos so I liked it just as much as before, which is quite a bit. I had forgotten the bit about the Weasleys and the Prophet which tickled me all over again. Thanks for writing. W.

Frank Hacklander posted a comment on Monday 22nd March 2010 1:30pm for Recovery

I like how you've changed this from the original and allowed Hermione at least the possibility of happiness. A couple of commas missing, I think, such as in the following: "Unlike Harry[,] I'm not a noble..."

bgoldnyxnet posted a comment on Monday 22nd March 2010 10:05am for Recovery

Hah! Good one! Really enjoyed this story. And it's not often that I run across a fanfic author who can (dare I say it?) write better than Jeconais. (Not as well as Anne, though. Sorry.)

I liked the way you skipped over revealing exactly how they defeated Voldemort, plus what they did with him afterward.

What's really odd is, I usually don't care for the "Ron is a clueless git and Dumbledore is worse" category of stories. But you made it work. Congratulations.

Entilzah posted a comment on Monday 22nd March 2010 8:03am for Recovery

Yay! Excellent finish to a great piece. I liked all the cleanups you did from the original version.

So... now that you have this one up and posted... get to writing new stuff more! :-)

Jimbocous posted a comment on Sunday 21st March 2010 6:11pm for Recovery

Nice one! Thanks for a great read!

Anansii posted a comment on Sunday 21st March 2010 5:21pm for Recovery

Gee, references! :) And we finally find out what happened to Voldie. Nice one.