Glen Cornell Doty posted a comment on Friday 5th August 2011 12:38am

This is a really cute story. No killing, no sex, lots of innuendo and humor. I really enjoyed it. Of course, I still like the killing and sex. But, every once in a while something like this comes along and it doesn't need it. There might even be room for a sequel. But if not, oh well. I'll probably reread this several times in the future.

ya done good.
Glen

Zamia posted a comment on Thursday 4th August 2011 11:41pm

Very enjoyable. Even more enjoyable would be Hermione serving at the bar. Bloody hell, better ring QANTAS and book a ticket. Cheers.
Z

mwinter posted a comment on Thursday 4th August 2011 10:55pm

That funny. thank you

Michael Cornfoot posted a comment on Thursday 4th August 2011 9:32pm

great story. would be great as a full length story

Robert Peeples posted a comment on Thursday 4th August 2011 9:01pm

I love it. Very real... ignoring the whole magic thing anyway lol. Life isn't all Destiny and Fate. He left because he was being treated like shite, and it wasn't any one thing... He's happy. I really like it.

MonCappy posted a comment on Thursday 4th August 2011 8:40pm

I happen to really like this story. I do have one nitpick, however. Articles in newspapers written to tarnish the reputation of an individual are libelous, not slanderous. Slander is spoken, libel is written.

Clell65619 replied:

- You know that, I know that, Hermione knows that, Harry doesn't know that. He's a Hogwarts Graduate after all.

M2J MandalorianJedi posted a comment on Thursday 4th August 2011 8:03pm

Not bad. Not my most favorite of your works, but far from being my least favorite. Well written and as believable as a story is that contains magic, dark lords, etc.

Michael10 posted a comment on Thursday 4th August 2011 8:03pm

Hahahahahaahahaha.
good little one shot. could stretch it to a two shot with what happens next.
keep up the good work

Quincy posted a comment on Thursday 4th August 2011 6:45pm

Well, actaully the line "Buy me lunch. I may be easy, but I'm not cheap." means he is at minimum a stripper.
I'm willing to accept that it's a special case though.

Clell65619 replied:

- How could be be a stripper? He's already naked except for his bow tie, cuffs and bar apron...

Chickenhawk posted a comment on Thursday 4th August 2011 6:32pm

Nice little story. You are quite right, I can imagine Harry wanting to leave. Obvious reasons being as stated the ministry, she british wizarding sheep and a fundamental desire to be in charge of his own life at last. A couple of typos, but otherwise very good.

Kara posted a comment on Thursday 4th August 2011 6:14pm

Oh, Harry, you man-whore! <grin> I like this, and I can totally understand Harry's reasoning. Too bad Angelina finked him out, though. I hope Hermione keeps the secret, although I doubt she will.

Clell65619 replied:

- Harry is not a whore. He never charges money.