Content Harry Potter Original Young Justice

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liz1611 posted a comment on Tuesday 23rd November 2010 10:38pm for Profit Motive

wonderful. loved the fleur-moldie mix. (so that was what the french was about.. :) i like this version of harry. excellent read.

TurtleBlue posted a comment on Saturday 23rd October 2010 8:27pm for Profit Motive

Hey! What's with Harry calling Wrong Hole "Draco" again? Did he develope feelings towards Cissa and ultimatly will treat Wrong Hole as a Step-son?

You need to have Hermione taken care of soon...she's about to burst!

I could envision Luna helping Harry accomplish his quest - only to be floored when Luna turns the table on him and adds another number!!!

Will Dora have another go at showing Harry her base form again?

Can Harry & Remo overcome Fleurimorts Allure?

jesterod posted a comment on Tuesday 5th October 2010 1:03am for Profit Motive

i love this i cant wait for more

gaharbert1 posted a comment on Wednesday 29th September 2010 3:35pm for Profit Motive

like i said just great but now you had to go and leave us with a cliffi
shame on you....lol
keep it coming

Pirazy posted a comment on Wednesday 22nd September 2010 8:39pm for Profit Motive

This is easily one of the most awesome crossovers I've ever read, question time.

1. Dumbledore is starting to play his annoying games with Harry, quite reckless considering Chiun and, probably Harry, are sitting on information that would completely ruin Dumbledore politically, namely the truth about Grindelwald. Is that going to bite Dumbledore in the ass at some point?

2. Since Fleur is obviously not dead and just momentarily indisposed, will Voldemort's spirit eventually be driven out of her body to possess someone else, leaving the possibility for a happy Delacour family reunion and some Veela gratitude for Harry?

3. Is Hermione's itch ever going to be scratched? The poor girl's going to be driven insane soon.

4. Luna might not have an itch yet but the Ravenclaw's sure could use some of Harry's special brand of dicipline. Who knows, he might even get some practice as a reward.

Keep up the good work.

bannanacupcakes posted a comment on Saturday 18th September 2010 2:15pm for Profit Motive

hilarious!!
please continue :)

Renzo7 posted a comment on Sunday 12th September 2010 9:08pm for Profit Motive

Great work! It's been very interesting to read so far, I hope you update soon.

Lerris Smith posted a comment on Saturday 4th September 2010 8:44pm for Profit Motive

This is another good chapter. My only comment, is I'm not sure you have enough material here to continue this for too many more chapters, unless, of course, Harry somehow starts teaching the sheep to fend for themselves. That might be interesting. Come to think of it, they are out one Defence against the Dark Arts professor.

Clell65619 replied:

- This story is plotted out at 10 chapters, so there are three to go.

- Next chapter, Harry meets up with his first real challenge, and starts losing spectacularly.

lazylion posted a comment on Saturday 28th August 2010 7:45am for Profit Motive

I love this story. You've convinced me to go out and buy the (Created, the) Destroyer book(s). (There're only 129 of'em, right?).

Thank you. I can hardly wait for the next installment.

gadriam posted a comment on Sunday 22nd August 2010 11:36pm for Profit Motive

Interestingly philosophical. I really enjoyed the whole momentum-displacement thing with the parachutie, but Hermione's reaction was amazing. The night of salt. Interesting concept. All in all, a great read to an avid fan of both worlds. Remo's tally sheet was so in character i laughed for way too long. I will now steal my neighbors mailbox in your honor.

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Clell65619 replied:

- I'm pretty sure that stealing a mailbox is a federal crime, so be sure to leave my name out of it when those kind, caring, personable federal cops are working you over... uh, interviewing you.

delrusant posted a comment on Sunday 22nd August 2010 10:44am for Profit Motive

great chapter, with some fun and some drama. Very entertaining and great rythm.

Jonez227 posted a comment on Sunday 22nd August 2010 12:05am for Profit Motive

oh please update soon. what a cliffhanger. kill the malfoy plaguing the wizarding world. except narcissa. harry should do what he's been doing to her. such an awesome story.

Ian Quest posted a comment on Saturday 21st August 2010 9:40pm for Profit Motive

Utterly brilliant, and hilarious! Delightful to see another chapter of this well-written, imaginative and original cross. Now all we have to do is wait impatiently for the next chapter!

tangentsferret posted a comment on Saturday 21st August 2010 2:36pm for Profit Motive

Oh, how wonderful, an update! Thank you! Sorry it took me so long to drop you a line after it was posted, I couldn't resist re-reading the whole thing, very slowly, savoring every word. The bit about Rome, in particular, just gives me the giggles every time I read it. That is *so* Remo. Classic. Sapir and Murphy would be proud.

One question: So, how long has Chiun been in the castle?

Clell65619 replied:

- I"m sure he's visited occasionally, just passing through, but Harry never saw him.

- Chiun will be 'on camera' at Hogwarts in chapter 9, and maybe somewhere else in chapter 8, I haven't really decided yet. I've never been real happy with the idea of Chiun working for Dumbledore, even though it was necessary to the plot, so I'm thinking about fixing it.

JaCee2u posted a comment on Saturday 21st August 2010 11:57am for Profit Motive

I liked the chapter, but I'm a bit confused by the title of it. Oh, well. Maybe the drugs have dulled my thinking, but I don't get it. Having a screwed up back really sucks.

Anyhow, I enjoyed the read, and will probably enjoy it again later when I re-read it. Thanks.

Clell65619 replied:

- The Title doesn't have any great meaning, it's just the title of a favorite Destroyer book.

vl100butch posted a comment on Saturday 21st August 2010 10:35am for Profit Motive

i can't wait for chiun to chow up at howwarts.....

dubmledore has to be going nuts.....i can only imagine draco's confession to the masses....

Clell65619 replied:

- Dumbledore? It's Cho, Hermione and Hagrid who will react the most...

joeBob posted a comment on Saturday 21st August 2010 9:37am for Profit Motive

Entertaining. Thanks for the update.

neely61 posted a comment on Saturday 21st August 2010 6:57am for Profit Motive

Love this story so far. I am a long fan of the Destroyer series and to have a crossover with one of my other favorites is great! Keep up the great work!

Wolfric posted a comment on Saturday 21st August 2010 2:11am for Profit Motive

Great chapter. I wonder how much Draco will bleed for this plan, hopefully all he has. Thanks for writing. W.

Anansii posted a comment on Friday 20th August 2010 11:48pm for Profit Motive

Y'know, Voldie should just give up and effervesce, right now... Glad to see this is still being continued and looking forward to what comes next!