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DrT posted a comment on Sunday 9th January 2011 8:00pm for The Last War

I must say, this version of Dumbles has lost contact with reality!

lwj2 posted a comment on Sunday 9th January 2011 6:55pm for The Last War

Being familiar with the Chronicles of the House of Sinanju -- this is great!

I'm looking forward to reading the rest of it when you put it up.

Thanks!

ThunderGod posted a comment on Sunday 9th January 2011 6:53pm for The Last War

I hate you!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Clell65619 replied:

- Which explains, I suppose, how no matter what the weather forecast, it always seems to rain on my picnics...

Lee Dickie posted a comment on Sunday 9th January 2011 6:31pm for The Last War

Yes, that is a horrible cliffie!

A great update, with the unusual concept of people having the backbone to disagree with Albus Dumbledore. Well done and thanks.

MarinePotterfan posted a comment on Sunday 9th January 2011 4:27pm for The Last War

Great chapter

Thanks for writing
MPF

Anansii posted a comment on Sunday 9th January 2011 4:07pm for The Last War

Oh my...

So Master Chuin is getting tired of waiting, and Voldie is pulling out the big guns. And Dumbles' little domain seems to be falling apart on him and serve him right.

Here's hoping there's less of a wait for the next chapter!

bothsidesoftheissue posted a comment on Sunday 9th January 2011 3:50pm for The Last War

EVIL!!! You are EVIL, I say! That is a HORRID cliffie, how could you do that to us, your most faithful readers?! ^.^ Seriously, this is going to drive me crazy until the new chapter is up. -Huntress

Riegert8 posted a comment on Sunday 9th January 2011 1:51pm for The Last War

Well written chapter

I find it hard to believe that Ron is not a purist, Action speak louder then what a person say. Ron action which is to call someone a mudblood, say an lot about Ron Personality. In this story Ron is a bully that pick on a person because she get on his nerve

It look like the best thing for the school if Dumbledore get fired

kb0 posted a comment on Sunday 9th January 2011 12:52pm for The Last War

Yes, it IS a horrible cliffie, but I can deal with it. :)

It's always nice to see an update to this story. I liked the handling of Draco. I also really liked all the prefects resigning, very well done. I have a story that has them doing that too (it's such an obvious thing when the staff goes so crazy).

As Albus becomes more senile, it's good to see Chiun go around him. That will help speed up the story too. :) Of course, the Dementors are a problem, but it'll be interesting to see how you work that out. Perhaps Albus will do something useful for once? ;)

I look forward to your next installment of this -- and to Harry Stark!

gadriam posted a comment on Sunday 9th January 2011 12:41pm for The Last War

Horrible cliffie, yes .. but great!
The Sun Source brightened my day considerably. Poor Harry, will he ever find someone who can take all the steps?
Looking forward to the unrestricted hunt, although i have a feeling that it might be done mostly by Chiun and possibly Remo, the way things are looking at this time. Good on yez. I will now key a lawyers car in your honor.

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Michael10 posted a comment on Sunday 9th January 2011 10:28am for The Last War

Yes bad cliffie bad! (Joke)
Keep up the good work and give us more of this soon.