Content Harry Potter Original Young Justice

Reviews

Lerris Smith posted a comment on Saturday 4th September 2010 8:44pm

This is another good chapter. My only comment, is I'm not sure you have enough material here to continue this for too many more chapters, unless, of course, Harry somehow starts teaching the sheep to fend for themselves. That might be interesting. Come to think of it, they are out one Defence against the Dark Arts professor.

Clell65619 replied:

- This story is plotted out at 10 chapters, so there are three to go.

- Next chapter, Harry meets up with his first real challenge, and starts losing spectacularly.

lazylion posted a comment on Saturday 28th August 2010 7:45am

I love this story. You've convinced me to go out and buy the (Created, the) Destroyer book(s). (There're only 129 of'em, right?).

Thank you. I can hardly wait for the next installment.

gadriam posted a comment on Sunday 22nd August 2010 11:36pm

Interestingly philosophical. I really enjoyed the whole momentum-displacement thing with the parachutie, but Hermione's reaction was amazing. The night of salt. Interesting concept. All in all, a great read to an avid fan of both worlds. Remo's tally sheet was so in character i laughed for way too long. I will now steal my neighbors mailbox in your honor.

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Clell65619 replied:

- I'm pretty sure that stealing a mailbox is a federal crime, so be sure to leave my name out of it when those kind, caring, personable federal cops are working you over... uh, interviewing you.

delrusant posted a comment on Sunday 22nd August 2010 10:44am

great chapter, with some fun and some drama. Very entertaining and great rythm.

Jonez227 posted a comment on Sunday 22nd August 2010 12:05am

oh please update soon. what a cliffhanger. kill the malfoy plaguing the wizarding world. except narcissa. harry should do what he's been doing to her. such an awesome story.

jalva200 posted a comment on Saturday 21st August 2010 11:54pm

rolf voldys using flures body huh

helsmaid posted a comment on Saturday 21st August 2010 10:47pm

LOVE it. please keep writting.

Ian Quest posted a comment on Saturday 21st August 2010 9:40pm

Utterly brilliant, and hilarious! Delightful to see another chapter of this well-written, imaginative and original cross. Now all we have to do is wait impatiently for the next chapter!

jalva200 posted a comment on Saturday 21st August 2010 9:07pm

hmmm not bad

tangentsferret posted a comment on Saturday 21st August 2010 2:36pm

Oh, how wonderful, an update! Thank you! Sorry it took me so long to drop you a line after it was posted, I couldn't resist re-reading the whole thing, very slowly, savoring every word. The bit about Rome, in particular, just gives me the giggles every time I read it. That is *so* Remo. Classic. Sapir and Murphy would be proud.

One question: So, how long has Chiun been in the castle?

Clell65619 replied:

- I"m sure he's visited occasionally, just passing through, but Harry never saw him.

- Chiun will be 'on camera' at Hogwarts in chapter 9, and maybe somewhere else in chapter 8, I haven't really decided yet. I've never been real happy with the idea of Chiun working for Dumbledore, even though it was necessary to the plot, so I'm thinking about fixing it.

JaCee2u posted a comment on Saturday 21st August 2010 11:57am

I liked the chapter, but I'm a bit confused by the title of it. Oh, well. Maybe the drugs have dulled my thinking, but I don't get it. Having a screwed up back really sucks.

Anyhow, I enjoyed the read, and will probably enjoy it again later when I re-read it. Thanks.

Clell65619 replied:

- The Title doesn't have any great meaning, it's just the title of a favorite Destroyer book.

vl100butch posted a comment on Saturday 21st August 2010 10:35am

i can't wait for chiun to chow up at howwarts.....

dubmledore has to be going nuts.....i can only imagine draco's confession to the masses....

Clell65619 replied:

- Dumbledore? It's Cho, Hermione and Hagrid who will react the most...

joeBob posted a comment on Saturday 21st August 2010 9:37am

Entertaining. Thanks for the update.

neely61 posted a comment on Saturday 21st August 2010 6:57am

Love this story so far. I am a long fan of the Destroyer series and to have a crossover with one of my other favorites is great! Keep up the great work!

Wolfric posted a comment on Saturday 21st August 2010 2:11am

Great chapter. I wonder how much Draco will bleed for this plan, hopefully all he has. Thanks for writing. W.

Anansii posted a comment on Friday 20th August 2010 11:48pm

Y'know, Voldie should just give up and effervesce, right now... Glad to see this is still being continued and looking forward to what comes next!

Riegert8 posted a comment on Friday 20th August 2010 8:26pm

Well written chapter

I like what happen to Dudley and his father

morriganscrow posted a comment on Friday 20th August 2010 6:16pm

That was a fabulous chapter! Poor Hermione.
This is, in my opinion, along with Bobmin's "Mutant Storm", the best Xover I've read. Thanks for all your hard work.

Clell65619 replied:

- Yeah, poor Hermie's got her first case of what an old girlfriend called 'the Screaming Thigh Sweats'.

- I'm not sure that my scribbling can really be compared with Bobmin's work, but thanks.

Lee Dickie posted a comment on Friday 20th August 2010 4:53pm

Another great chapter, thanks.

mithrilandtj posted a comment on Wednesday 4th August 2010 1:25am

UPDATE PLEASE!!!!