Sankara posted a comment on Tuesday 26th August 2014 6:31am for A Bureaucrat is Freed

That was brilliant. Thank you :)

Wolfric posted a comment on Saturday 23rd August 2014 8:15pm for A Bureaucrat is Freed

I enjoyed your story. Perhaps Harry could save the planet from asteroid colision by denying the asteroid a permit? Thanks for writing. W.

JB posted a comment on Saturday 23rd August 2014 10:56am for A Bureaucrat is Freed

I love the premise behind this story. Very well written as always and would love to see more Inspector 13.

mfoto posted a comment on Saturday 23rd August 2014 6:35am for A Bureaucrat is Freed

Enjoyed reading this story

mwinter posted a comment on Saturday 23rd August 2014 4:03am for A Bureaucrat is Freed

LOL LMAO. Awaiting more.

normalguycap posted a comment on Friday 22nd August 2014 4:02pm for A Bureaucrat is Freed

Ahahahaha! A Bake Sale? Hahaha! Oh those silly goblins.

This was fun. Thank you.

Michael Cornfoot posted a comment on Friday 22nd August 2014 3:08pm for A Bureaucrat is Freed

I do hope that you carry on with this story as its great

millercommamatt posted a comment on Friday 22nd August 2014 1:42pm for A Bureaucrat is Freed

This was a fun story. Thanks!

Renzo7 posted a comment on Friday 22nd August 2014 10:48am for A Bureaucrat is Freed

Brilliant story, DM!

I've greatly enjoyed the narrative, and found your Wizard version of "rock, paper, scissors, lizard, Spock" to be quite funny. Shouldn't Pettigrew (or Crouch Jr.) have filed a form for kidnapping Harry?

I look forward to reading other works by you soon.

Kind regards,

Renzo

LoneWolf282 posted a comment on Friday 22nd August 2014 7:37am for A Bureaucrat is Freed

Totally cool!

darthloki posted a comment on Friday 22nd August 2014 7:11am for A Bureaucrat is Freed

Absolutely hilarious.

Zamia posted a comment on Friday 22nd August 2014 4:39am for A Bureaucrat is Freed

One can imagine how great...Britain would be if Sir Humphrey Appleby & Bernard Wooley were auditors. After allowing your grandkids to watch 11hrs of Yes Minister, you could put them to bed and use this yarn as a nightcap. Enjoyable laugh and Harry gets a decent bird. Cheers.

Z

Mistress of Potions posted a comment on Friday 22nd August 2014 1:56am for A Bureaucrat is Freed

That was some of the best crack I've read in a very long time. Do you think Percy will propose to Harry? He seems awfully smitten with Harry's newfound compliance with the rules.

Kara posted a comment on Thursday 21st August 2014 11:06pm for A Bureaucrat is Freed

And with the Professors' baked goods sales: Do they have the appropriate licensing for the for-profit distribution of baked goods? Are their flats' kitchens rated for commercial baking? Are they following the proper food-safety guidelines?

No? Tsk, tsk. More fines ...

anf600@hotmail.com posted a comment on Thursday 21st August 2014 10:16pm for A Bureaucrat is Freed

Truly a hilarious fic - it's like he's become an IRS agent....scary!

Ken Warner posted a comment on Thursday 21st August 2014 9:56pm for A Bureaucrat is Freed

This has been so much fun to read - tiny anecdote, I have an older brother, retired from the US Army and working as 1st mate on tugs - I introduced him to fanfics, and to the fanfic authors site a couple of years ago. He sent me the link to this story, telling me he had laughed all the way through it.

Making bureaucrats fun, and the good guys - NO one else could do that.

warmest regards

Pamela St Vines posted a comment on Thursday 21st August 2014 7:54pm for A Bureaucrat is Freed

What an amusing little tale. You are still the king of fanfic hilarity. Thanks for brightening my day!

bgoldnyxnet posted a comment on Thursday 21st August 2014 2:59pm for A Bureaucrat is Freed

Ha ha ha ha ha (ad infinitum)!

If I keep on laughing like this I'm going to get the hiccups.

darksidhe posted a comment on Thursday 21st August 2014 2:51pm for A Bureaucrat is Freed

Shades of Mr Black in here, I see. Too awesome. I'd love to see this drawn out to 100,000 words from start to here. Good story.

GBTtown posted a comment on Thursday 21st August 2014 1:29pm for A Bureaucrat is Freed

This was original and hilarious! I am all in favor of Inspectors 13 and 84 returning but not quite sure that there is a challenge left for Harry.