Content Harry Potter Original Young Justice

Reviews

Viridian posted a comment on Wednesday 9th September 2015 1:37am for Seventh Year

To hell with the critics, this was awesome. I even teared up at the end.

I like how you (and thus Ron), owned up to his crappy behavior regarding the Tournament. Grieving over Barry is a reason, not an excuse, and Ron doesn't try to use it as one.

Canon-Ron is no more flawed than a normal teenager. Harry was sometimes a berk as well. Sometimes I think some of the more virulent Ron-bashing is rooted in creepily frustrated Hermione-lust. (A lot of those fics also seem to idolize her in varying degrees, to the point it reads like the author has a crush on her and is jealous of Ron. It makes for uncomfortable reading after a while...)

Trogdor89 posted a comment on Wednesday 26th November 2014 2:18pm for Seventh Year

i absolutely loved this fic. it was nice to see ron live up to his potential, and crossing over with "The Flash" was brilliant.

gadriam posted a comment on Friday 18th July 2014 4:39am for Seventh Year

I can't believe i missed the original upload day! Ah well, better late than never. Brilliant story, and you didn't really change much of his character at all, really. Ron's audience interactions cracked me up and all in all, this will serve as a great inspiration. There are familiar twitches in my writer's block..=)

Thanks

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takon65 posted a comment on Monday 14th July 2014 5:28am for Seventh Year

I enjoyed the story very much. I would love to see what happens to Ron in the new dimension and see if his attempts to 'get back home.' I would also like to see the reactions of other people to the "Orange Blur".

The only 'whoopsie' I saw was that the prophesy given about Harry and Voldemort is stated in this chapter in 1990, shouldn't that be 1980?

Anansii posted a comment on Sunday 13th July 2014 11:47pm for Seventh Year

Applause! And thanks for letting Dr. Fate inform Harry and Hermoine. I forsee a long and lunatic future for "The Whiz" who will never, ever, quite understand what's so funny... Good one!

Ian Quest posted a comment on Saturday 12th July 2014 6:37pm for Seventh Year

Thanks for a great story! I really enjoyed it- it was well written, interesting, original and fun! Too many people forget that even 'sidekicks' are the heroes of their own stories, and just because he's a convenient character to either fade into the background or demonise, that doesn't mean it's a fair (or even realistic) treatment of him.

Besides, it's an AU, so really, who cares if something's different? I've read stories where Voldemort was the hero - and the author made it believable and workable. If someone tries to tell you how you 'should' write a story (other than true constructive criticism, of course), I'd recommend telling them to talk a long walk off a short pier... :)
Thanks for sharing this story with us, and I look forward to your next story!

red jacobson posted a comment on Saturday 12th July 2014 8:59am for Seventh Year

Hey Buddy:

Good to see you've gotten this story wrapped up, and nice job with the Nabu appearance. I have to admit, I'm not sure what the significance of the Whiz B Three Four line was, especially since you had Wally and Artemis (who?) laughing about it. Sorry, I never watched the Young Justice cartoon, and Flash was never a member of the Young Justice comic that I read.

Red

Clell65619 replied:

The Zeta Teleporters confirm the user.  WIth a two digit number for Justice League members and a 'B' two digit number for members of 'The Team', therefore, the computer identified Ron as 'Whiz" and his reference designation is B-34.

Kara posted a comment on Saturday 12th July 2014 7:41am for Seventh Year

Okay, generally I don't like Ron, but in this ... yeah. Well done. Very well done.