r00ney posted a comment on Tuesday 5th May 2015 10:03pm

I hope this is finished someday, it shows great promise!

ParadoxWithinTruth posted a comment on Thursday 20th December 2012 2:06pm

lololololololol

sisyphus1967 posted a comment on Saturday 21st July 2012 1:52am

Another classic. I hope you finish it.

selonianth posted a comment on Saturday 30th June 2012 1:22pm

Well, this is handy. Didn't know you posted up a fic of JUST this out of your oneshot fic. I have a challenge based off this up though unfortunately no one has answered it just yet.

dogbertcarroll posted a comment on Saturday 12th March 2011 5:29pm

I'd love to see another chapter of this.

DrgnMstr posted a comment on Saturday 23rd October 2010 4:25am

[u]Please[/u] continue this story! I haven't seen another one even close to it, and that's becoming more and more rare in HPverse.

Please?

DrgnMstr

brad posted a comment on Friday 22nd October 2010 7:26pm

I came across a reference to this chapter/story in a Yahoo group recently and was snared anew. I know I've commented on it before but:

> A/N4: The story isn’t done, another chapter perhaps… When I get around to it.

Can we hold you to that? There's one big huge hook even I can see for part 2:

"Cedric was killed by Peter Pettigrew. In addition he named all of the Death Eaters he saw that night."

I can really see the cohort taking on at least Wormtail; they were so driven just to find out the truth from Harry, and now they're motivated even more by their collective guilt over what they had done, and were going to do, to the boy. Surely they'll pursue Pettigrew and exact their revenge for the cold murder of one of their own?

For some reason the second part - "he named all of the Death Eaters" - sticks even more in my mind. Less reason for the Hufflepuffs to go after them - the DEs had no direct involvement in Cedric's murder - and if the Hufflepuffs could take out the DEs now, why not 12 years earlier, etc? But the idea of the cohort planning the deaths of the DEs, removing them from society - for society's welfare - since Fudge won't ... it's an attractive notion.

Like I probably said in my first review of this tale it works well in pushing the 'noble young hero' button. And I've love to see Hannah take pains to be a good friend ... and maybe Susie make Harry's dreams come true.

(Letting him look at her all day.)

Or the Hufflepuffs, now that they've directly seen what Harry is up against, assist him - directly or indirectly - to prevail.

Can you add this to the (long) queue of fics needing your attention/completion? Cheers.

Abraxan posted a comment on Tuesday 12th October 2010 10:49pm

I love it! Where's The next chapter? There needs to be more!

Abraxan

NuitTombee posted a comment on Monday 27th September 2010 11:58am

Pweese suh...may I have some m...

Genericrandom posted a comment on Thursday 16th September 2010 11:44pm

This story makes me crack up every time I read it. I really hope you get around to finishing it up sooner, rather than later. It's hilarious. 'Hufflepuppies'. *snrk* Drunk people are always hilarious. Sometimes more so (sometimes less so) when it's deliberately premeditated.

loretta537 posted a comment on Saturday 24th July 2010 3:51pm

this sounds great

nomad062 posted a comment on Sunday 13th June 2010 3:15pm

I've read this story many times and I still enjoy it. Do you still plan another chapter or so?

KirijamaScion posted a comment on Monday 10th May 2010 8:05am

awww another one shot I wish had more to it

Ezra'eil posted a comment on Sunday 2nd May 2010 10:04am

Well, Clell. Do write more, yes?

Alex Austin posted a comment on Wednesday 10th March 2010 1:07am

Iiiiintereting. I don't suppose this is going to be a Harry/Susan romance, is it?

ejh838 posted a comment on Thursday 4th March 2010 5:27am

I am really glad to have discovered this. I am in the middle of writing a long and boring presentation on the successes and failures of the weapons inspections in Iraq before the 2003 war. THis allows me to break it up and enjoy just reading for a time.

Thanks mate.

GremlinXTJ posted a comment on Friday 19th February 2010 2:59am

You wrote this some time ago, didnt you?
I was always a bit sad you didnt take it anywhere.

kb0 posted a comment on Thursday 18th February 2010 8:59am

I really liked this, especially how the few stood up for Harry at the end. I hope you get around to ch2 soon. :)

Thanks,
Kevin

Slytherin66 posted a comment on Thursday 18th February 2010 5:22am

Puffs are so much fun I wish there were more stories from that house. Had Harry been with a Puff I think his life would have been WAY better. I look forward to the next chapter.

Wolfric posted a comment on Thursday 18th February 2010 12:58am

I enjoyed your story. Thanks for writing. W.