dogbertcarroll posted a comment on Monday 27th April 2020 11:01pm for 1

Not sure why he would show Hermione the notes, but the rest was fun.

The Seeker posted a comment on Thursday 5th March 2020 4:38pm for 1

Very good job in expanding Lily and James' sacrifice to its logical end. The conversation between Lily and Tom at the end was very well done.

MrHawkeye posted a comment on Thursday 31st October 2019 2:20am for 1

Interesting story, hope to see more from you soon.

Wolfric posted a comment on Saturday 26th October 2019 3:42am for 1

Good story. Thanks for writing. W.

clpadget posted a comment on Friday 16th August 2019 11:00am for 1

Thanks so much for writing and sharing. I have never read anything like this. Truly appreciate your unique and thought provoking stories. As always, you are a fabulous writer. Thanks so much!

Patches posted a comment on Monday 15th July 2019 9:29pm for 1

This is a different way to get rid of Voldemort. Really well done. I just don't like Dumbledore's meddleling. Thanks for writing. p

KC posted a comment on Sunday 14th July 2019 11:26pm for 1

The attacking only in May reasoning twist is amusing and clever.

robbspotter posted a comment on Thursday 6th June 2019 3:44pm for 1

Completely out there but i love it

Anansii posted a comment on Monday 13th May 2019 8:29pm for 1

Haven't seen THAT before - good one!

cyber_911 posted a comment on Sunday 12th May 2019 1:27am for 1

This was a great read. Thank you.

gmanfatman posted a comment on Saturday 11th May 2019 6:06pm for 1

It is nice that Tom did himself in.

Jimbocous posted a comment on Saturday 11th May 2019 1:55am for 1

A virus, so to speak, eh? Interesting concept. Thanks, fun read.

Wanderer posted a comment on Thursday 9th May 2019 8:58pm for 1

Ha! That was both brilliant and bemusing.

Thanks for sharing!

Pharfig posted a comment on Thursday 9th May 2019 5:54pm for 1

Wow! I haven't seen anything like this before, and it's really good! I think your characterization of Post Possession Voldie was pretty creepy with the way he expressed the "Lilly" emotions. Well done!

GBTtown posted a comment on Thursday 9th May 2019 7:48am for 1

Good short story. Not entirely clear as to why it would be alright for Hermione to find Lily's notes at this time if it endangers her life.

EdTheBeast posted a comment on Wednesday 8th May 2019 7:34pm for 1

Very good. The expectation of H&H was great! Explaining James & Lilys

sacrifices!

multilingual posted a comment on Wednesday 8th May 2019 4:24pm for 1

Thanks for posting this one!

I love the idea of encoding in English-who needs Latinate derivations anyway?

And, of course, lily and James working together for protection, not just one or the other, can give Harry a much more complete concept of parental involvement than JKR's "James died downstairs without even scratching Voldie, and Lily the one who did all the protection" description.

Kudos!

Rick D Gale posted a comment on Wednesday 8th May 2019 1:57pm for 1

A very interesting story. I'm assuming that all the other Horcruxes have been taken care of at this point. It seem like Karma that Voldemort would take care of the rest of the DE's.

Thank you for a great little read.

rdgale

Lady Stardust posted a comment on Wednesday 8th May 2019 1:11pm for 1

This was great!

Lee Dickie posted a comment on Wednesday 8th May 2019 10:17am for 1

Great writing of a novel take on Lily's protection.Well done.