Jim_xinu posted a comment on Thursday 23rd September 2010 11:41pm for Custody
That was likely the best smack down of any version of Umbridge I've ever see. :-)
Good chapter, thanks for sharing it with us.
Brin_Londo5 posted a comment on Thursday 23rd September 2010 11:13pm for Custody
Loved the bit with the fake Malfoy head. Makes me almost wish it was the real thing, but then that'd make this a "Dark Harry" fic.
Plus, the mental bitch-slap to Fem!Dumbledore was great, too.
Snag posted a comment on Thursday 23rd September 2010 11:00pm for Custody
I've said it before, and I'll say it again - I do like this story. About the only thing I can say against this chapter is that there wasn't nearly enough interaction with Harry and Luna. He's gone and slipped into Ultra-Efficient Mode and hasn't had a chance to release some of that steam by being able to be normal. It seems to me that he should be starting to get a little stressed about now.
- This chapter was really more about Harriet than Harry, to be fair, it is her universe...
- Next chapter there will be some Luna/Harry time, but not too much, they are, after all, only 15.
Vyrexuviel posted a comment on Thursday 23rd September 2010 7:11pm for Custody
GREAT chapter, and I bloody LOVE dumbledore's last line! ^.^ here's hoping you update this fic again soon!
Riegert8 posted a comment on Thursday 23rd September 2010 2:19pm for Custody
well written chapter
dogbertcarroll posted a comment on Thursday 23rd September 2010 12:12pm for Custody
"I couldn’t leave her. Hell, I didn’t even know she was a she, I could barely see. Thanks for the glasses by the way." Harry watched a thestral flying over the forbidden forest. "My Granger always said I had a â€˜saving people thing’."
He can't see them anymore?
Can't see what? Thestrals? Sure, he saw Cedric die prior to the transfer.
Lee Dickie posted a comment on Thursday 23rd September 2010 11:07am for Custody
Great update with a well written slap down of Umbridge by Harri and Fudge.
marcelhm posted a comment on Thursday 23rd September 2010 8:23am for Custody
beats me why but somehow I never read this story from you b4. and well what a mistake that turned out to be! :D
GZ man it was a ball.
joeBob posted a comment on Thursday 23rd September 2010 12:41am for Custody
Entertaining chapter. Thanks for the update.
John Wilburn posted a comment on Wednesday 22nd September 2010 9:44pm for Custody
I've been waiting for so long for this. Thank you, you did not disappoint. I really don't have a lot of consrtuctive criticism to impart,
I could'nt write something this entertaining if my life depended on it. So,therefore, I won't try.
- Thanks. Glad you like it.