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Christopher Estep posted a comment on Monday 9th July 2012 1:54pm for Chapter Two - First Contact

Oh, now THIS is fun - I wondered what would happen if Sirius the MILF hunting wizard ran into Serena the man-hunting Elder Witch. (Remember, neither "historically" shows any signs of having boundaries as to whether their targets are magical or not.)

thekev posted a comment on Friday 8th June 2012 10:46pm for Chapter Two - First Contact

Great story

ChianaZhaan posted a comment on Monday 28th May 2012 10:20am for Chapter Two - First Contact

Loved the reunion of Rowena Ravenclaw a.k.a. Clara with Hogwarts and the ghosts and poltergeist and sorting hat.

And the true origins of Snape's hair is revealed, hahaha.

Thanks

Katsuhito posted a comment on Thursday 3rd May 2012 10:31pm for Chapter Two - First Contact

Okay, I know I already reviewed this chapter, but I was rereading it, and that bit about the Leader of the Plaid still cracks me up! Thought you'd enjoy knowing that. :)

yungatheart posted a comment on Friday 20th April 2012 12:03pm for Chapter Two - First Contact

Great job. I remember reading the first chapter awhile ago and really liked it and stumbled into this follow up. I hope there is more coming. I fondly remember Bewitched when I was a kid and its great to see it miked with Harry Potter. Its alot of fun to read. Thanks!

Rexnos posted a comment on Thursday 19th April 2012 10:27pm for Chapter Two - First Contact

I'm finding the story amusing as all get out, but I'm a little worried about where it's going. It's hard for there to be any sort of conflict when the main characters are vastly more powerful than the rest of the universe. That said, Jeconais managed to get over that hump, so I'm sure you'll manage as well. The story's been fun so far regardless.

Later,

Rex

Zucht posted a comment on Saturday 14th April 2012 8:23pm for Chapter Two - First Contact

his is brillaint and clever. I can hardly wait for you to unleash uncle Arthur on Hogwarts... Tell the twins I want 20Gs on Snape exiting the castle at a full run while pulling his hair out.

Darkwoofe posted a comment on Thursday 12th April 2012 12:57pm for Chapter Two - First Contact

Awesome! I was really looking forward to this story being updated! I like the way that you merged the two worlds so well. Nicely done. I'll be looking forward to future updates.

Addlcove posted a comment on Wednesday 11th April 2012 8:22am for Chapter Two - First Contact

My thanks to Bob as I loved this chapter, hoping you will continue this one, laughs a plenty ;)

Mistress of Potions posted a comment on Tuesday 10th April 2012 12:03pm for Chapter Two - First Contact

British magical society gets schooled! I was hoping you would continue this story, it has a very interesting premise that appears to be maintaining its momentum. It also is a good read. Thank you.

Cliff Bryner posted a comment on Tuesday 10th April 2012 9:19am for Chapter Two - First Contact

A pure delight. I could enjoy more of these episodes. Weekly would be heavenly. Thanks.

Gaelyn posted a comment on Monday 9th April 2012 3:57am for Chapter Two - First Contact

Wonderful story as usual. When I realized the cross, I was a bit unsure, but you have done well merging them both! Serena and Sirius...that's an image that does make one shudder and look for a bunker.

silvereagle posted a comment on Sunday 8th April 2012 7:40pm for Chapter Two - First Contact

amazing story. thanks a bunch for putting this up. if you could continue it i would really appreciate it. i havent seen a story like this before and i truly enjoy reading it.

William Martin posted a comment on Sunday 8th April 2012 5:34pm for Chapter Two - First Contact

Please keep up the great work on this story!

Talk about the power he knows not!

I'm not sure if I'm hopeing Harry goes to Hogwarts or if you take him in an entirely new direction,

except that if you do, he won't get to meet Hermione.

I'm sorry, but how can anyone think Harry could marry Ginny? They both have explosive tempers.

It would be like marrying flame with petrol, or gasoline for the Americans.

Sorry, didn't mean to rant. Seriously, keep up the great work! Thanks for the story so far!

mommiefish posted a comment on Sunday 8th April 2012 1:53pm for Chapter Two - First Contact

Hi!

This is interesting! One of my favorite shows in my youth!

"Please, sir, I want some more." (And according to Bobmin, asking for more might get you to write sooner!)

<snicker>

C.

lwj2 posted a comment on Saturday 7th April 2012 10:09pm for Chapter Two - First Contact

Thoroughly enjoyed the 2nd chapter. Dumbledore et al. meeting the Elders was hysterically funny; the U.S. SecMagic and Dumbles was equally funny.

I've no idea what you two have planned, but feel certain that when Voldie meets the Elders it will be noteworthy.

Thanks for the update, I hope Spring arrives in Baja Canada sometime soon and thanks for writing and sharing your stories.

The Resident posted a comment on Saturday 7th April 2012 11:50am for Chapter Two - First Contact

Excellent start. I remember the TV series and the movie that spawned it (I Married a Witch). Having it 'merged' with the HP Universe is truly inspired. Keep up the great work. I eagerly look forward to more chapters.

alueua1 posted a comment on Saturday 7th April 2012 9:17am for Chapter Two - First Contact

Thank-you for adding another wonderful chapter to this story. I'm glad that Bob nagged you if this is the type of thing I get to read as a result :).

Allisan posted a comment on Saturday 7th April 2012 7:42am for Chapter Two - First Contact

this is a treat to read. thanks for sharing.

frankocsic posted a comment on Saturday 7th April 2012 6:56am for Chapter Two - First Contact

Awesome update. More please! At first I thought some pranksters charmed Snapes hair into blond curls, but to have Clara 'help' him was even better. Great that Dumbledore has seen the light. Remus and Sirius in Harry's life, yay! Loved all the interaction between Elders and wanders. Good job.