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Zamia posted a comment on Saturday 7th April 2012 3:16am for Chapter Two - First Contact

Excellent chapter. From the reactions of those at Hogwarts to Harry enjoying and using his heritage and growing up americanised. Can see some fun & games in the future. Surprised Dumbles didn't set Sirius up when he told him about Harry. Can also see Serena becoming a marauder if asked. Looking forward to more. Cheers.

Z

Wolfric posted a comment on Saturday 7th April 2012 1:41am for Chapter Two - First Contact

Good chapter. Thanks for writing. W.

Melferd posted a comment on Friday 6th April 2012 11:47pm for Chapter Two - First Contact

More like...Adore!!!!!

Gioia posted a comment on Friday 6th April 2012 4:54pm for Chapter Two - First Contact

I'm nuts about this story. Please count me among those who would be delighted to join in Bob's nagging if it results in more chapters. Thank you so much for the fun your story brought to my day! I am eagerly awaiting more.

ThunderGod posted a comment on Friday 6th April 2012 4:53pm for Chapter Two - First Contact

love it, can't wait to see what happens with Sirius and Serena..maybe even Remus...LOL

jua-chan posted a comment on Friday 6th April 2012 4:14pm for Chapter Two - First Contact

This story is really funny. Great to see Dumbi lost for words.

I was really surprised that there was an update after so long. I'm looking forward to future updates. Want to see what Harry and Family can get up to.

Carol Layland posted a comment on Friday 6th April 2012 4:11pm for Chapter Two - First Contact

I just simply love it and I am absolutly looking forward to the next installment. Thank you for this wonderful, amusing and innovative story.Caro Layland

sarahgirl12384 posted a comment on Friday 6th April 2012 2:46pm for Chapter Two - First Contact

Love this!!!! I had despaired that there was going to be a continuation of this story... and I am so glad you continued! I have never seen another story where Bewitched and Harry Potter Merge... and it is great! I love how you make Samantha stronger and more determined than in the TV show. Keep up the great work!!!!

dogbertcarroll posted a comment on Friday 6th April 2012 1:19pm for Chapter Two - First Contact

Great chapter. I expect the chaos Harry causes to be much more entertaining than the brief appearences of Voldemort and his repreated smooshings.

Deborahsu posted a comment on Friday 6th April 2012 12:45pm for Chapter Two - First Contact

Well, I'm enjoying it, too! I'd love to see an update sooner rather than later if you can manage it. :-)

gadriam posted a comment on Friday 6th April 2012 12:44pm for Chapter Two - First Contact

Absolutely wonderful. Such a shock to the brits thet there are still people around to make them all look like muggles. The easy rapport between the remaining marauders and the Stevens was a bit surprising, but very nice.

As "Poke fun at Snapes hair" is a minor commandment in my personal religion, i thank you for the observance.

All in all, the combination between Plotline and Author for this story has a tremendous potential for greatness. Keep it up. When you update, i won't be far away.

g

Orion posted a comment on Friday 6th April 2012 12:18pm for Chapter Two - First Contact

Great! Thanks for writing.

Bob Officer posted a comment on Friday 6th April 2012 8:26am for Chapter Two - First Contact

Nice Twist, Serena and Sirius.

Since Sirius doesn't trust Dumbles and if Serena's TV personality holds true, she will delight in Screwing with the "Leader of Light/Plaid."

Maybe the Elder could find a way to cure Remus, while they are playing with the story.

Patches posted a comment on Friday 6th April 2012 3:28am for Chapter Two - First Contact

This is a great story. I love Bewitched. It is fun to think of "wand wavers" as a weaker form of witches and warlocks. Of course Harry would be stronger than most and now he is a warlock of the Elder Sect. I love the way that Samantha put the magical FBI and Dumbledore in their place. Having Peeves and then the Slytherin House Ghosst and Helena Ravenclaw all recognize "Aunt Clara" as Rowena Ravenclaw was terrific. It was wonderful when she told Albus, Minerva and Severus the true story of the end of the founders. It was great too when Samantha put Severus in his place for his attitude toward her "son", Harry. Changing his ha\ir from Blond curls like Lockhart to straight greasy black hair was funny. I love all the magic in this story. I especially look forward to more of this story. Thanks for writing. pms

M. F. Enright posted a comment on Friday 6th April 2012 3:25am for Chapter Two - First Contact

an excellent chapter. thank you very much!

Anansii posted a comment on Friday 6th April 2012 2:31am for Chapter Two - First Contact

Grin - I'd actually forgotten about this one. Thanks for chapter two!

rejndzer87 posted a comment on Friday 6th April 2012 2:30am for Chapter Two - First Contact

i can't figure it out: is this a sabrina the teenage witch crossover? you mention the witches' council, and they can lock spells, and stuff like that, but i don't remember them needing any signature gestures. of course, it's been years since i've last watched sabrina, so i could be wrong... great story, by the way. characters are interesting. tho i can't see how anything in the wizarding world could possibly pose a serious threat to one of the elders, let alone a whole family of them.

Zaz posted a comment on Friday 6th April 2012 12:55am for Chapter Two - First Contact

Awesome! : D

Mathew McCrillis posted a comment on Thursday 5th April 2012 10:29pm for Chapter Two - First Contact

Grandma Clara has told me about how she found the bad guy trying to hurt me and she messed him up real good.

That is comedy gold, nice job on this chapter too!

Cheers!

jim5 posted a comment on Thursday 5th April 2012 9:52pm for Chapter Two - First Contact

Thank you Bob for nagging about this one, and please keep nagging.