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lazylion posted a comment on Monday 27th June 2011 10:04pm for The Beginning

This is lovely. I really loved Bewitched when I was little. Thank you. I'm looking forward to see more.

dogbertcarroll posted a comment on Thursday 23rd June 2011 2:48pm for The Beginning

Rare cross and very enjoyable.

Mike M. posted a comment on Wednesday 22nd June 2011 9:46pm for The Beginning

Love this story. I think it has the potential to be as good as or better than your other works which I love. Can't wait for more. Mike M.

alifromnm1 posted a comment on Wednesday 22nd June 2011 9:33pm for The Beginning

Wanted to let you know I've read your chapter at least three times since it was posted. I guess I'm hoping I'll see an update. I have so enjoyed this and can't wait for the next chapter. It is so unique. Writing is sharp. Keep up the great work!

Deborahsu posted a comment on Sunday 19th June 2011 12:30am for The Beginning

This story has an interesting start, if you ignore the fact that Tabitha would have been old enough to be Harry's mom ... if you hadn't somehow brought the Bewitched crew forward in time! Magic, it is! :-)

Geneva posted a comment on Monday 13th June 2011 7:15pm for The Beginning

I am really enjoying this crossover. :) Its light and fluffy and its a new take on "the power the dark lord knows not" :) plus Clara was always one of my favorites on bewitched...all those door knobs! Thank you for a very enjoyable read!

LongLivedOne posted a comment on Saturday 11th June 2011 3:24am for The Beginning

VERY cool!! I'm very much looking forward to more.

Could swear I'd heard those names (Clara / Endora) before, then Samantha's name pops up... Bewitched!! I LOVED that show!!

Endora rocks!!

Teresa Lynne posted a comment on Friday 10th June 2011 1:16pm for The Beginning

Chunkle........this looks like the beginning of another fun story! Methinks Hogwarts is going to get quite a surpriae from Harry and his family! I can't wait to see how Endora deals with Dumbles and Snape! If Snape just looks at Harry wrong he might end up as potions ingridients! Pity....(not)I can see Samantha and Darrin telling Dumbles that their son will not be used to clean up his mess, and if he tries it he'll regret it severely. As always, I look forward to the next chapter! :)

biged78 posted a comment on Friday 10th June 2011 6:31am for The Beginning

Looks to be the beginning of another excellent story. Don't think I've ever seen a Bewitched crossover before.

00_Knight posted a comment on Thursday 9th June 2011 8:50am for The Beginning

Interesting as usual! Can't wait for the next update

FireStar01 posted a comment on Wednesday 8th June 2011 11:22pm for The Beginning

I hav4e to say I never have seen this type of a crossover and it is very clever. I can so see Endora acting like that. Darrin's reaction was great too. The line has to be a classic. The one about him being happy to see her. Anyway can't wait to see Sam and her family deal with voldy and dumbles.
I look forward to seeing where you will take them. I would perhaps suggest that the children of Rowena may have only inherited wand magic. It makes more sense then their losing their real magic. Because face it Clara/Rowena as lovable as she is was a bit of a scew up with her type of magic.

Katsuhito posted a comment on Wednesday 8th June 2011 2:17pm for The Beginning

Nice! I was always a fan of the Bewitched! series back in the day. I even watched the 2005 movie, which was kind of ok. (I wasn't all that impressed with their choice of Will Ferrell as the male lead.) That being said, I'm a little sad that this is only going to be a short story. On the other hand, a longer story means it would take more of your time, and I'm also eager for the next chapters of Sun Source and a few others of your work.

So, Dumbles attempts to assuage the fears of the Stevens family, while still getting Harry into Hogwarts. Hmm, will the population of the Wizarding school call him by Stevens or Potter? And how proficient in "Elder" magic will he be before he arrives in Scotland? Just a few questions of which I'm looking forward to the answers.

noylj posted a comment on Wednesday 8th June 2011 9:36am for The Beginning

Sorry. The fact that Bumbles made the search for Harry a kidnapping and the fact that he is not being at all truthful to Sam means that he is a manipulative, senile, psychopathic, megalomaniac (with delusions of godhood), goat-assaulting bastard just like canon. Even the American knew that he was a complete and total excrement emitter.
I would think that the Elder sect could easily use wands just as a normal human can use crutches--it just doesn't add anything to their magical abilities.

Clell65619 replied:

- Well, let's look at it without the filter of knowing the narrative of this story and of canon (not to mention a few billion fan fics)

- There is an attack on the Potter's home. Both of the adults are killed, and so, apparently is at least one of the terrorists. Where is Harry?

- Was he taken by associates of the apparently dead terrorist? Who knows. That makes Harry a missing child, and when a missing child just shows up in the company of adults without there being a metric shittonne of paperwork associated with it (the adoption records the FBI were filed in Connecticut, NOT in the boy's country of birth) kidnapping is a reasonable assumption.

- I am trying very hard to write a Dumbles who isn't a bastard in this one, and while he may not be well liked by his international peers, that doesn't necessarily make him a bad guy.

- yes the Elders can carry wands, but like you said, for what point. at one point during the death of the founders, I commented on Clara dropping the wand she had never needed.

in-kinsfire posted a comment on Tuesday 7th June 2011 5:58pm for The Beginning

Interesting story. Please keep going.

Ginger posted a comment on Tuesday 7th June 2011 12:41pm for The Beginning

I never thought of anything like this but I love it. I can't wait for the next chapter.

Cassandra30 posted a comment on Monday 6th June 2011 1:00pm for The Beginning

I enjoyed this chapter! Very cool!

Princess Fictoria posted a comment on Monday 6th June 2011 2:41am for The Beginning

Loved it and eagerly look forward to more. Loved the way Clara's mistakes are seen as incredible acts of powerful magic by the wand users. I can hardly wait to see just how the elder sect will choose to deal with voldemort when he returns.

Wolfric posted a comment on Monday 6th June 2011 1:38am for The Beginning

Good chapter. I am not usually interested in crossovers but this seems like a bit of fun. Thanks for writing. W.

Zamia posted a comment on Monday 6th June 2011 12:17am for The Beginning

One of the only TV series I have had a chance to watch. Very enjoyable. With the power Tabitha & Harry have, hopefully they can run amuck and cause Dumbles as much pain as possible. Cheers.
Z

Madmax posted a comment on Sunday 5th June 2011 11:02pm for The Beginning

I must say this is a very unique plot and you have done a great job in setting things up. I look forward to seeing where you take us with this story. I must say, I did not like Endora very much during the original series, but you have done a good job softening her personality without loosing her disposition.

Keep up the good work. I look forward to your next chapter.