Glen Cornell Doty posted a comment on Friday 5th August 2011 12:38am for Sandy Crack Shack
This is a really cute story. No killing, no sex, lots of innuendo and humor. I really enjoyed it. Of course, I still like the killing and sex. But, every once in a while something like this comes along and it doesn't need it. There might even be room for a sequel. But if not, oh well. I'll probably reread this several times in the future.
ya done good.
Zamia posted a comment on Thursday 4th August 2011 11:41pm for Sandy Crack Shack
Very enjoyable. Even more enjoyable would be Hermione serving at the bar. Bloody hell, better ring QANTAS and book a ticket. Cheers.
mwinter posted a comment on Thursday 4th August 2011 10:55pm for Sandy Crack Shack
That funny. thank you
Michael Cornfoot posted a comment on Thursday 4th August 2011 9:32pm for Sandy Crack Shack
great story. would be great as a full length story
Robert Peeples posted a comment on Thursday 4th August 2011 9:01pm for Sandy Crack Shack
I love it. Very real... ignoring the whole magic thing anyway lol. Life isn't all Destiny and Fate. He left because he was being treated like shite, and it wasn't any one thing... He's happy. I really like it.
MonCappy posted a comment on Thursday 4th August 2011 8:40pm for Sandy Crack Shack
I happen to really like this story. I do have one nitpick, however. Articles in newspapers written to tarnish the reputation of an individual are libelous, not slanderous. Slander is spoken, libel is written.
- You know that, I know that, Hermione knows that, Harry doesn't know that. He's a Hogwarts Graduate after all.
M2J MandalorianJedi posted a comment on Thursday 4th August 2011 8:03pm for Sandy Crack Shack
Not bad. Not my most favorite of your works, but far from being my least favorite. Well written and as believable as a story is that contains magic, dark lords, etc.
Michael10 posted a comment on Thursday 4th August 2011 8:03pm for Sandy Crack Shack
good little one shot. could stretch it to a two shot with what happens next.
keep up the good work
Quincy posted a comment on Thursday 4th August 2011 6:45pm for Sandy Crack Shack
Well, actaully the line "Buy me lunch. I may be easy, but I'm not cheap." means he is at minimum a stripper.
I'm willing to accept that it's a special case though.
- How could be be a stripper? He's already naked except for his bow tie, cuffs and bar apron...
Chickenhawk posted a comment on Thursday 4th August 2011 6:32pm for Sandy Crack Shack
Nice little story. You are quite right, I can imagine Harry wanting to leave. Obvious reasons being as stated the ministry, she british wizarding sheep and a fundamental desire to be in charge of his own life at last. A couple of typos, but otherwise very good.
Kara posted a comment on Thursday 4th August 2011 6:14pm for Sandy Crack Shack
Oh, Harry, you man-whore! <grin> I like this, and I can totally understand Harry's reasoning. Too bad Angelina finked him out, though. I hope Hermione keeps the secret, although I doubt she will.
- Harry is not a whore. He never charges money.