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00_Knight posted a comment on Sunday 13th February 2011 12:12pm for Dementor Blood

Let me first say that I was impressed with your cliffhanger the previous chapter. I wasn't really angry, just really really "put out" by your impressive cliffhanger! I enjoyed it, and this whole story for that matter, immensely!

That said, you were still delightfully "E"vil for how well you made that cliffhanger!

Now about this chapter, I felt it lacked an appropriate cliffhanger to rival the last one! But considering the flak you took over the last one, you probably didn't wanna get lynched! :D
So I understand no cliffhanger.

Completely unexpected was the offer to Hermione about breeding, that I was shocked and impressed by it at the same time! Kudos. That and the "talk" between Chiun and Harry, about Millicent was also hilarious.

I was kinda surprised that Harry and Chiun didn't take out the dementors at Azkaban, but it made sense, so that worked out really well!


All in all another great chapter to this epic tale, and I eagerly await the next installment!

Wolfric posted a comment on Sunday 13th February 2011 4:00am for Dementor Blood

Fine chapter. Thanks for writing. W.

makieus posted a comment on Saturday 12th February 2011 7:44pm for Dementor Blood

It is your fault that I had started reading the Destroyer series. Very nice job by the way. On book 116, and much more to go.

Keep up the great work!!!

Raven69 posted a comment on Saturday 12th February 2011 6:26pm for Dementor Blood

I reread the last couple chapters to refresh my mind on what was happening I noticed that it seemed to be that Thorfinn Rowle was killed for thinking that Fleur's body was attractive. Did I read that older scene wrong or did the name just get reused by mistake?

Clell65619 replied:

- Uh... Oh, yeah. The DE killed by Fleur was Thorfinn Tomas Rowle, the Similarly named Spanish cousin of Thorfinn Thomas Rowle who met his end in this chapter...

- Yeah. Cousin. They've got to buy that, it's bullet proof!

Jim_xinu posted a comment on Saturday 12th February 2011 4:51pm for Dementor Blood

Good chapter, thanks for sharing it with us.

ThunderGod posted a comment on Saturday 12th February 2011 1:45pm for Dementor Blood

okay, I no longer hate you..and your next picnic will be a nice clear day, with no pests

dogbertcarroll posted a comment on Saturday 12th February 2011 11:45am for Dementor Blood

And I find myself wondering is she'll agree just because of her hormones and the many things she can learn from Harry.

lwj2 posted a comment on Saturday 12th February 2011 10:41am for Dementor Blood

Thank you, thank you. This is hysterically funny.

I'd really like to see what Hermione does about Chiun's £150,000 offer and Millicent's reaction when she discovers it.

Lee Dickie posted a comment on Saturday 12th February 2011 7:31am for Dementor Blood

Another great update, thanks.

Zamia posted a comment on Saturday 12th February 2011 6:08am for Dementor Blood

I like the Master's view of understanding women. Will Hermione understand what the Master has offered her or will she fly off the handle. Like Harry's handling of Rowle & the dementors. Excellent chapter. Cheers.
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DrT posted a comment on Saturday 12th February 2011 4:52am for Dementor Blood

Wow, lots of action! If Hermione gives in to her interest in Harry, this will be one of the odder ways of getting them together! Thanks for the update; I really enjoyed it

Michael Foerster posted a comment on Saturday 12th February 2011 4:38am for Dementor Blood

Chiun proposal for bearing a son of Harry to Hermione is probably the most shocking point in this chapter. If she's willing to even think about the consequences of consenting to this?
The destruction of a Horde of Dementors an other turning point, - no Dementors for this Voldemort.
But the final impact of Harry's handling of Rowle to the society (in terms of: choose your 'master' wisely) will take very little time to spread. From Lady to Lady, gossip is faster than light. One can easily see the hordes of former 'imperius'-claimants seemingly pelting the aurors for their questioning under veritaserum and imprisonment to get away from the conflict with their lives intact.
Thanks for sharing.

Riegert8 posted a comment on Saturday 12th February 2011 2:54am for Dementor Blood

Well written chapter