Muad'Dib posted a comment on Friday 11th June 2010 3:49pm

I think you didn't read google properly when you were searching for a well know cemetary in Bristol, mate. It's actually Arno's Vale, not Amos Vale.

Clell65619 replied:

Actually, it's a misremembering on my part. I attended a funeral there in '78 for a cousin of my then fiance, now wife.

00_Knight posted a comment on Thursday 10th June 2010 5:08am

Interesting, probably enough to refine and add to the story.

00_Knight posted a comment on Thursday 10th June 2010 4:58am

Hmmmm..... Interesting and could have potential, if you'd decide to do it.

Philip Jacobs posted a comment on Wednesday 9th June 2010 7:15am

Ok, I know that you're not planning on actually using this in the current Technomage storyline, but thanks for sharing it with us. I think this is one of the best father to potential suitor talks I've encountered since the "Shovel Talk" in Jedi Granger.

Christopher Estep posted a comment on Wednesday 9th June 2010 4:50am

The very idea of Victor von Doom, DDS...or even more hilarious, of him cracking under the pressure of *dental school*, considering he's been the recipient (and the delivery system) of things that would (and have) crackeed seemingly quite-substantial folks. However, that paints a VERY different picture of one Stuart Granger.

What *other* surprises are hiding in the Granger family closet?

morriganscrow posted a comment on Wednesday 9th June 2010 2:20am

Victor Von Doom, the...dentist?

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Okaaay....

Wolfric posted a comment on Wednesday 9th June 2010 12:32am

Good segment. Thanks for writing. W.

dan26 posted a comment on Tuesday 8th June 2010 10:56pm

Doctor Doom a dentist oh dear lord you have to admit

Dan Priest posted a comment on Tuesday 8th June 2010 7:43pm

actually one of doctor doom's distant cousins was a dentist and installed mind control implants in his wealthier patient's teeth so he could have them sign over their funds before getting them declared insane. It was a one shot in a issue of she hulk back in the nineties.

Lee Dickie posted a comment on Tuesday 8th June 2010 5:37pm

Great fun, thanks.

Riegert8 posted a comment on Tuesday 8th June 2010 5:19pm

Well written chapter

Patches posted a comment on Sunday 7th March 2010 2:50am

This is sad. I'm sorry that Harry is mourning again. Thank you for a nice little interlude I'm sorry it is sad and Harry has to fight again. pms

Evan Mayerle posted a comment on Friday 5th March 2010 11:17pm

Yes, you can most definitely smell and feel the angst. Voldemort is going to find out that there's Hell to pay for what happened and Harry, and friends, will take payment in like coin. I rather suspect that Tom has no real idea of just how much whup-ass Harry can, and will, bring down on them. It will b e instructive to the rest of the wizarding world.

AngelQueen posted a comment on Friday 5th March 2010 11:58am

*wibbles* Poor Harry! :(

I do like that last line, though! Heh, people had better stay out of the way, because I have a feeling that once Harry gets into his anger stage of grief, he isn't going to care much who he rips apart. If Dumbledore or his Order of the Burnt Chicken gets in the way of him going after Tommy 'I have Daddy Issues and I'm Taking Them Out on the World' Riddle, well, they won't be in his way for long.

Great AU moment! I also get the feeling that Parvati isn't going to sit by for long. She wants justice and revenge for her sister too. Good job! :)

Dale Dietzman posted a comment on Friday 5th March 2010 11:25am

So-o-o-o-o, just WHY should Harry NOT kill the evil ones who kill without mercy, without restraint, without remorse???? HARRY IS NOT DUMBLES.

NOT being willing to kill, when killing is needed, is Dumbels failing, and he makes others pay for his mercy with their pain and their blood, because HE can't stomach doing what is necessary.

Voldie and Co. have declared WAR, and in War soldiers don't "make arrests". They make corpses, because corpses don't get up and shoot you in the back. Neither do they get broken out of prison to kill again.

Clell65619 replied:

- No, Harry isn't Dumbledore, but he is the son of Tony Stark.

- The Marvels have killed on occasion, but only as a very last resort. this is the culture that Harry has been brought up in and the one he believes to be 'right'. If the scene shown in this short happened in story, then Harry would go Dark Lord hunting and come home with a pelt. I've got an idea or two for dealing with Tom that doesn't require Harry to kill. Having access to the allies that Harry will have is going to be a big help.

Crys posted a comment on Friday 5th March 2010 5:53am

> It has been pointed out to me that I sometimes have horrible things happen to Harry's girlfriends. I'm trying to stop doing that.
If you're doing that because you want to change, then good. Don't change cuz the readers ask.

Everyone has their own thing. If this works for you and you want to continue to do it this way, then continue.

I'll stop before the rambling becomes incomprehensible.

This chapter: Yep, angst is just oozing out of it. Which is, of course, the point. Even for being so short, it still managed a lot of emotional impact.

Clell65619 replied:

- It wasn't so much I wanted to or not, it's that I wasn't aware that it had become a minor theme of my stories. I was made aware of it when a review asked 'What horrible thing are you going to do to Hermione this time?'

morriganscrow posted a comment on Friday 5th March 2010 5:35am

That was beautifully written. Not maudlin, nor angsty (in a goffick/oh woe sense) nor drenched in purple prose. It was a clean, clear snapshot of grief and the approaching stormfront of righteous, freezing rage.
Excellent job getting the balance just right.

jgkitarel posted a comment on Friday 5th March 2010 2:09am

Considering Harry's state of mind, I think Tony will give him a bye on a murder spree, as long as they're Death Eaters.

Though I find that you have Harry not killing in the actual Technomage story to be a bit fitting.

There are worse things than killing someone. Killing them means you simply want them dead, no matter how long it takes or how painful it is. The Marvelverse heroes are proponents of a sort of poetic justice, and you don't get that by simply killing off your enemies.

Even the best of them aren't that merciful at times.

Clell65619 replied:

- Well considering what Tony did on the Skrull homeworld...

- There are so many ways to abuse Tom using the Marvel Universe that killing him isn't really necessary

Eric_Von_Nesslau posted a comment on Friday 5th March 2010 12:08am

Death Eaters are going to be full up after this one....

dan26 posted a comment on Thursday 4th March 2010 8:14pm

Oh dear this should be interesting but I belive that this isn't a bad story