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Patches posted a comment on Saturday 20th September 2014 5:23pm

This is bad. I am so sorry Luna has been damaged and doesn't remember her feelings for Harry. Umbridge is more horrible than I have ever seen before. What idea has Orestes come up with? I hope they can restore Luna memory. What did Fudge mean about Umbridge destroying one of their means to end the war? I look forward to more of this story. Thanks for writing.

I really hope you do complete this story before 2020. That is more than 5 years away. I know I read the earlier chapters before but it has been a while. Thanks again for writing. p

Patches posted a comment on Saturday 20th September 2014 4:37pm

Orestes certainly gave Harri good information about the trial but Luna's was even better and Luna's capture of the Malfoy girl and the terrizing of the adult Malfoys did the trick. It seems her treatment of the "Undersecretary" was quite effective and even Fudge backed her up. I'm glad Harry was there. It is funny that the Headmistress knew he was there all the time. Harry did a good job of getting it through to the Headmistress that he is not like the other boys of her world. I look forward to more of this story. Thanks for writing. p

Patches posted a comment on Saturday 20th September 2014 3:48pm

Harry really has a genius for finding the wrong place to be at the right time. At least he saved Luna and her mother. Thank goodness for that. It is good that Bellatrix counterpart is nomore. The dark lady was misinformed and now Harry is back in fighting form and Moody is right. betwee the two of them the dark lady should be out of the picture. I look forward to more of this story. p

Patches posted a comment on Saturday 20th September 2014 1:07pm

This is very good. I'm glad that Harry has Luna and Orestes has Harri. It is too bad that Arthur is like Ginny and has a crush on Harri. Harry did a great job of showing Arthur where he is going wrong. That should help some. I love the crazy way the Grangers celebrate Christmas. That was funny. I look forward to more of this story. p

Patches posted a comment on Saturday 20th September 2014 3:45am

What a horrible ritual. It is sad a fun day had to end so badly. Now Harry is seeing his sister twin in the torture caused by the Dark Lady of her demention as he suffered from Voldemort in his demention. I hope this ends soon. Thanks for writing I look forward to more of this story. p

Patches posted a comment on Saturday 20th September 2014 3:08am

This is a great outing for all of the teens. I like the way that Harry and Harri both spotted the watchers. I'm glad Harri identified Billie Weasley. At least they know they are watchers and not death eaters. Death eaters wouldn't have been that patient anyway. I look forward to more of this story. Thanks for writing. p

Patches posted a comment on Saturday 20th September 2014 2:33am

Harry with the help of his friends is doing a great job of scarring the daylights out of Thubani and Erin. They both think Harry is going to kill them or someone is going to kill them, one if they bother Harri and two if they keep bothering Harry. Very well done. Thanks for writing. pms

Ratboy posted a comment on Saturday 20th September 2014 2:14am

Yes, 4 years and I really hope it isn't 2020 before it is doe :) I reread the complete story to remind me what was going on and I must say it is just as good now as it was the first time I read it.

Evan Mayerle posted a comment on Friday 19th September 2014 9:50pm

Okay, that was a nasty move by Umbridge and 'twill be quite interesting to see if the mental effects can be reversed. An interesting chapter and it should be most interesting to see where matters go from here.

Patches posted a comment on Friday 19th September 2014 5:15am

I'm so glad that Harry got inducted into the council. He has done a good job of getting Harri, Veronica and Orestes started with their training. I'm glad Moody surprised Harry and that she is going to back them up when they have to fight the Dark Lady. I look forward to more of this story. p

Patches posted a comment on Friday 19th September 2014 4:56am

I'm glad that Harry is going to help train Harri but now it seems that the council is looking to control Harry. I look forward to more of this story. p

takon65 posted a comment on Friday 19th September 2014 4:38am

Thank you for an enjoyable story. This has to be the second most innovative I have read. Don't worry Clell, you have the title locked on the inovative one too, Inspector 13.

Patches posted a comment on Friday 19th September 2014 4:29am

Wow! Harri gets beaten up by a bad auror teacher and Harry beats up the teacher with Anastasia Moody as backup. Now Harry is going to introduce Harri to his trainer. That is going to be interesting. I'm glad Luna stood up for Harry when the death eaters attacked by the Shrieking Shack. Now they are really going to learn to train hard to beat the Dark Lady of this universe. I look forward to more of this story. p

Patches posted a comment on Friday 19th September 2014 4:03am

Harry's new teacher is Voldemort? That is a twist. It makes sense though that the room would provide an adiquate teacher. The teaching paid off. Harry killed 3 people to save himself and Luna. I'm glad Auror Bones and Luna told Harry he had done the right thing. He had saved lives even though it meant that he had to kill to stop 3 bad people from killing him and Luna. I'm glad someone is on Harry's side. Thanks for writing. p

Patches posted a comment on Friday 19th September 2014 3:42am

Well Harry got into Hufflepuff and that seems to be working well. Harry met Luna on the train and she is still a she. That is good and Harry had a good time talking to her. Luna also clapped for him when he was sorted into Hufflepuff. He is getting along well. He dealt with Dean Thomas incarnation in this universe and let her know he wasn't interested and why. Harry managed to call Dobby and he was very happy with Harry Potter and also knows Harri Potter. Now Harry knows about the room of requirement and is using it to work off some frustrationa and Harry also knows how to find the room for whatever he needs it for . Now Luna has asked him for a walk and has kissed him. He now knows that Luna is interested in him. I look forward to more of this story. Thanks for writing. pms

Patches posted a comment on Friday 19th September 2014 3:15am

I'm glad that Luna is a girl even though everyone else is opposite of what they were in Harry's previous universe. I think Harry and Luna just might hit is off in this universe although I think Harry will also be involved in things that happen to Harri also. I look forward to more of this story. p

Patches posted a comment on Friday 19th September 2014 2:51am

Well Harry is starting to work out the differences in this universe and they are really backward from his universe. He is making friends though and I look forward to more of this story. p

Patches posted a comment on Friday 19th September 2014 2:31am

This is an unusual story. I've read other stories where Harry finds himself with a twin but this is different again being a parralell universe story. I look forward to more. p

Chessicfayth posted a comment on Friday 19th September 2014 1:37am

I have been waiting sooooo long for this update. I'd given up hope lol. Thanks for the chapter!

Evil cliffhanger with Luna is evil. And a cliffhanger.

But seriously, thanks for the work. I really enjoyed it, and the inspector 13 fic you posted recently. A pleasure to read.

Riegert8 posted a comment on Thursday 18th September 2014 10:51pm

I feel sorry for Harry that he get arrested and lose Luna at the same time, Ok maybe he did not lose Luna. But there a chance that Luna will not return to normal, well normal for her