Content Harry Potter Original Young Justice

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Kara posted a comment on Thursday 18th September 2014 10:26pm

Hooray! An update! Excellent!

And the Dark Lady is indeed most reasonable ...

seiryu posted a comment on Tuesday 10th June 2014 4:18pm

I can certainly see why Dionysodoros hates his name. His mirror analogue Nymphadora's name suggests, at least, that her parents might have found some beautiful wilderness setting and they were so overcome by its beauty that they made love right then and there. "Gift of Dionysius" sounds like "hey, we both got drunk, and nine months later you came along.

MattKennedy posted a comment on Wednesday 23rd April 2014 2:11am

Any chance of this story continuing? I've never been able to bring myself to read a girl!Harry story before, but I love the approach you took in this story. And it's a bloodly awesome story too! Love the acceleration magic as well. First time I've come across anything like and think it's wonderful. :D

melann37 posted a comment on Monday 14th October 2013 11:51am

brilliant story

Zatada posted a comment on Monday 1st April 2013 4:59am

I'm kinda disappointed with this. It was going decently along, then suddenly in this chapter, Harry does a complete personality flip. I can understand being upset after the duel with the Death Eaters, but the whole "I killed them. I've gone Dark." is way out there. It seems you basically have his personality succumbing to the gender swap world and becoming a whiny 15 year old girl who freaks out over everything. It just seems way out of character for his personality compared to previous chapters.

Paracelsus posted a comment on Thursday 15th March 2012 5:42pm

I saw this artwork today and thought immediately of this story.

http://scifi.icanhascheezburger.com/category/harry-potter/

(Depending on when you get this message, it might be a few items down on the page. Trust me, you'll recognize it when you see it.)

Be well. -- Paracelsus (on ff as alchymie).

lwj2 posted a comment on Monday 5th March 2012 11:31pm

As I've said before, this is a great story. I noticed in one of your responses that you'd hit a dry spell a while ago. I do hope it ends, I'm really looking forward to reading your conclusion.

Thanks for writing and sharing this.

lwj2 posted a comment on Monday 5th March 2012 9:56pm

Great story, I like the gender changes, role changes. Leaving Luna as female is brilliant.

You might want to correct the following, you've mixed genders here (although it's quite understandable):

Quoted Matter:

Thubani Malfoy sat at the desk in his dormitory, his fingers steepled before him, deep in thought. Something had happened to her mother, and it had something to do with the Potter boy, that much he had managed to get out of her father. The Dark Lady was very displeased with the Malfoys just now, and that had trickled down to the Slytherin common room, where Thubani had received a beating as payment for past insults. News of the Malfoys losing the protections of the Dark Lady traveled fast.

Lucile would regain her position, the fifth year was certain of that; in the mean time the Dark Lady wanted more information about both the Potters.

The female Potter had been on Thubani’s list since the ride on the Express first year when the Muggle loving fool had rejected her offer of friendship. And the male Potter, with his insults about her appearance and touching…

HappyCthulhu posted a comment on Saturday 14th January 2012 1:11pm

Why u no finish!

4rm36uy posted a comment on Monday 31st October 2011 6:07pm

great story, I can't wait for the next chapter.

Terry Chang posted a comment on Monday 3rd October 2011 10:36pm

Really enjoyable adventure. Best is obviously the switch that you've put in. But still the way you've written this is well done. Interesting plot device with the come and go room, the calling up of shades is really cool. Looking forward to see if this story continues.

point09micron posted a comment on Sunday 25th September 2011 12:08pm

Come to think of it: where did Tommi Riddle come from? The women still give birth in this universe right? So Fem!TomRiddleSr. would be the mother, who ran back home after the love potion from Man!Merope wore off. So how did Tommi still come to exist?

Kara posted a comment on Friday 2nd September 2011 3:31pm

So ... it's been almost a year. Where's the next dozen chappies on this, and when will Harri &co. enter (stage right) to kick Tommy Riddle's scaly arse?

I look forward to seeing the fe(male) sides of the different characters meet their other halves.

Clell65619 replied:

- Would that I could just turn it on and off. The words for this one just aren't flowing.



- I've had dry spells on this one before and recovered from it. I'll be back to it as soon as I can.

LKK posted a comment on Tuesday 31st May 2011 8:56pm

This was extremely fun to read. It's a bit surreal and confusing to read about the gender counterparts but it was interesting. Harri and Harry are a little OP but I like it. You've done a great job. Update?

Quincy posted a comment on Tuesday 12th April 2011 12:54am

You seem to have made a gender slip here with Dobby. Involving wizards and 'Miss’es Grangy'.

Quincy posted a comment on Tuesday 12th April 2011 12:05am

Oh, No! I'm trapped in a universe of sexually aggressive women and I'm being hit on by twins. What evershould I do?
This story cracks me up and I hope to see more of it someday.

QOShea posted a comment on Saturday 5th March 2011 3:43am

Not sure if it's been mentioned, but you've got Thubani referenced a few times as 'him' in her little section.

QOShea posted a comment on Saturday 5th March 2011 3:37am

Luna was the birthday girl, but Strews is the one who got spanked.

bluezy posted a comment on Sunday 31st October 2010 3:08am

I am impressed with the way you have been describing the problems one would have if one were to move to an alternate reality where the ones one knows are the other gender. I also like the detailed way you write. Thank you for entertaining me.

Bluezy

svella posted a comment on Sunday 10th October 2010 10:36pm

My god I love this FIC you need to supply your legion of fans with daily updates lest the mob be persuaded to lay siege to your review function.

It's fun and a good read - what else do you need?