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doraemax posted a comment on Saturday 29th September 2018 11:31am

Ah, a sad chapter with a sad news. A toast to Chilord. His book is hilarious. It would've translated into a cartoon/anime really really well. Though i admit i had wished he went with a silghtly more serious take for that book.

Again, sad chapter. Though a good lesson to Harry and Franklin. i.e. to know and finally accept the limits of being a human, ie. a creation, instead of creator. It would not do for them to play god latter on.

And what's up with Padme. Why did i have a bad bad feeling for her. I hope the tragedy of Merope Gaunt will not repeat itself here.

thank you

Michael Cornfoot posted a comment on Wednesday 12th September 2018 1:25pm

Good chapter as always

Surprised that Padma has been dating someone else since she is supposed to be with Harry... Did Hermione ever get hold of her after that phone call?

RyokoTenchi posted a comment on Monday 10th September 2018 1:41am

So i understand that juvenile romances don't always last but why do you keep having the women fuck harry over? First a girl he had a crush on kissing him and than nothing else. Than a girl leaving him cause she can't handle his lifestyle. And now a girl cheating on him... what's next hanging his girlfriend rip out his heart with a spoon? Love the story but man is harry getting the shaft romance wise.

Lambdaman78 posted a comment on Sunday 9th September 2018 12:55am

Thank you for this so much for this new chapter! I just reread the last five chapters to get back in the flow of the story and it was an amazing ride. Thanks so much!

mwinter posted a comment on Thursday 6th September 2018 7:16pm

Good update.

RubinCompServ posted a comment on Wednesday 5th September 2018 10:20am

NOOOOOOOooooo!!!! 8 months and that's all we get? We must have more? What will it take for us to get more? Stop cooking - I'll open an unlimited line of credit at 5 restaurants of your choice! Personal hygine? I'll hire an ... associate ... from Vegas to take care of that for you! Just please, GIVE US MORE!

hellstorm posted a comment on Tuesday 4th September 2018 8:14pm

I can honestly say I truly enjoy reading this story please Continue to update as often as possible I really want to see more of the story. It has awesome plot twists and just the right amount of romance and heart string pulling moments in it. Thank you for taking the time to write this.

ILikeToRead posted a comment on Monday 3rd September 2018 5:30pm

I don't think I've ever read a FanFiction that destroyed Voldemort's body in the way you did in this chapter, spectacular. Bummer of an ending with the death. Thanks for sharing!

Kairan1979 posted a comment on Monday 3rd September 2018 11:58am

I guess Harry/Padma is doomed? He is going to catch her in the act or something?

strandale posted a comment on Sunday 2nd September 2018 4:06pm

ok wow after a summer like THAT and returning to hogwarts to find out about padma? ooooh boy

Michael Cornfoot posted a comment on Saturday 3rd February 2018 10:21pm

Just started reading this story again and thought that it is a great story so far.

Cant wait for more updates

Wildfire 25 posted a comment on Sunday 21st January 2018 11:03pm

Namors mother was one of the rare atlantians that could breathe air. They explained this in the comics from the 1940s. She was sent to the surface as a spy. Buy a copy of the 75th anniversary of marvel collection.

mysuv1 posted a comment on Friday 12th January 2018 12:55am

Ohhh now waiting definately.

Wanderer posted a comment on Friday 5th January 2018 8:24pm

The first duels were pretty funny, but the kidnapping, while expected, definitely came at an unexpected time. Thanks for the update! Yes, I realize Harry will be without his suit - hopefully he will have retrieved his wand? Otherwise he'll be in little more than a unitard alone against the dark lord... unless his 'watcher' keeps track it seems certain that chaos magic is on the menu! M

Wanderer posted a comment on Friday 5th January 2018 8:20pm

Gotta love Luna! Her "poor Dragon" monologue was hilarious :)
Dude! I mean... really? Doom!!!? Dude...
LOL this story is awesome.
M

Wanderer posted a comment on Friday 5th January 2018 8:19pm

" "It's not what it looks like," Neville said. "It's so very much weirder than what it looks like."
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Right off the bat a snort-laugh from Nev. Oh man, I can see that Lockheed is going to add a whole new dimension :D to the story.
You did a really good job with Orion Black, not too far to any extreme, and yet clearly an "old school" fellow. Leaving the dread of Walburga to our imagination was well done as well :)
M

Pfeonyxdrache posted a comment on Friday 5th January 2018 6:41pm

Grosartige geschichte wann gehts weiter und geht es über haubt weiter?Jedenfals ist die geschichte Herrausragendt Lustig und zum Schissen Komisch ich mag sie.

fyrecat posted a comment on Friday 5th January 2018 1:32am

Great story so far! I hope to read more soon!!!

Thanks for sharing!

Wanderer posted a comment on Wednesday 3rd January 2018 11:36pm

"
Neville is the only the seventh of my students to discover the concept entirely on his own, and the first in most of two hundred years."
The Alchemist looked on with approval as the combined Elemental submitted to the boy. "Yes, I expect great things from young Mr. Longbottom."
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So Cool!
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"Bombing from orbit isn't the answer for everything," Harry objected.
"It's a good answer for a whole lot of things," Tony disagreed. "And you make a good point; a dedicated satellite over Hogwarts would make me feel better, and that satellite having a few precision kinetic packages would make me feel a lot better."
"There is nothing precise about orbital bombardment," Harry sighed.
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I was laughing so much with this!
Gotta love the idea of Franklin Jr. & Hermione :)
Lockheed!!? Ohs Noes... poor Harry! lol

Wanderer posted a comment on Wednesday 3rd January 2018 2:16am

Tigra and Sirius... yeah, I could see that lol

Wow... excellent job with the death of Peter.

They let him mope for two months? I honestly couldn't see either of those girls having that much patience. M