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noylj posted a comment on Friday 5th February 2010 4:43am

I have almost certainly already reviewed, but this story at this point as the same failing as so many HP fanfics--why would any loving parent ever let their child go to a school with a headmaster who has proven that he will do whatever he feels he must to get whatever he wants? Then, after Harry has had at least one death-defying experience that can be laid at the feet of this selfsame headmaster, the parent then sends Harry back.
What parent in the real world (who's actions aren't distorted to fit the plot of some story) would ever let the child go back to that school?
Yet, the stories never explain this totally unbelievable action of a loving parent.
Now, if I was Stark, I would be working night and day on some way to "turn off" magic so magicals will be virtually defenseless. If, that is, he really cares for Harry and wants him to live and be relatively safe in the bigoted world of the english magicals.
I know that if the headbastard came to meet me the way Bumbles came to meet Stark, I would not let my children within 500 miles of hime and a continent or two would not be too much. But then again, I love my children and will not knowingly allow them to be exposed to unknown dangers...and just a couple of months at Hoggy would show me that no child should be in that house of horrors. Just one story of Snape would have my child out of there (and, if I had Stark's money and power, there would be one missing potions dick).

Clell65619 replied:

- [shrug] I can't say I disagree, but that makes for very short stories...

- Of course one of the reactions I got to Technomage was 'What parent would allow an 11 year old to have access to the weapons the Techsuit had?" I responded with 'What parent would allow an 11 year old with a weapon that could do tickle, kill, and everything inbetween based purely upon the will of the user?'

- Yet the children of Hogwarts all have their wands...

- Sometimes for the sake of the story, people have to do silly things.

- As far as 'turning off magic' Wait for 7th year.

jesterod posted a comment on Friday 5th February 2010 2:07am

i love this story i read it when it was newish on ffn is this still in progress or abandoned?

Clell65619 replied:

- in progress.

ladyimmortal posted a comment on Thursday 4th February 2010 10:30pm

LOL!

I loooove this chapter. It made me laugh in parts and wonder in parts. I am curious which of Harry's 'group' has been assigned the mission of trying to capture his attentions...

I did feel for the lad - losing your first crush is never easy!

Excellent job - as always, Clell!

mwinter posted a comment on Thursday 4th February 2010 9:36pm

Another Chapter soon?

Clell65619 replied:

- Working on it.

Ronnie McMains posted a comment on Thursday 4th February 2010 9:33pm

I have always found it interesting that Fudge completely ignores the fact that his own Undersecretary is responsible for Harry being adopted by Tony. His attitude seems to be "Since you just pointed out the reason we're here today is all our fault, we're not going to listen to you. Get lost!"

The question now is, can even a god teach certain old goats new tricks?

Riegert8 posted a comment on Thursday 4th February 2010 9:21pm

This is a good chapter

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Riegert8 posted a comment on Thursday 4th February 2010 9:20pm

This is a very good chapter

Riegert8 posted a comment on Thursday 4th February 2010 9:17pm

This is a very good chapter

Riegert8 posted a comment on Thursday 4th February 2010 9:14pm

This is a very Good chapter

Riegert8 posted a comment on Thursday 4th February 2010 9:13pm

This is a good chapter

Riegert8 posted a comment on Thursday 4th February 2010 9:12pm

This is a good chapter

Riegert8 posted a comment on Thursday 4th February 2010 9:11pm

This is a good chapter

Riegert8 posted a comment on Thursday 4th February 2010 9:10pm

This is a very Good chapter

Riegert8 posted a comment on Thursday 4th February 2010 9:09pm

This is a good chapter

Riegert8 posted a comment on Thursday 4th February 2010 9:07pm

This is a very good chapter

Riegert8 posted a comment on Thursday 4th February 2010 9:05pm

This is a very good chapter

Riegert8 posted a comment on Thursday 4th February 2010 9:04pm

This is a very good chapter

Riegert8 posted a comment on Thursday 4th February 2010 9:02pm

This is a very good chapter

Riegert8 posted a comment on Thursday 4th February 2010 9:02pm

This is a good chapter