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jeffstrauser@yahoo.com posted a comment on Friday 29th October 2010 7:52pm

Outstanding chapter!!!! I'm glad to see an update, I've reread this story 4 times now!!!! Will we get to see Harry using other metals like Titanium and such to make the magical computer???? Will Adamantium play a role in the computer???? I know this will sound nerdy and stuff but what about Mythril???? Do keep up the outstanding work and update soon please!!!!:):):):)

insertparagraph posted a comment on Friday 29th October 2010 11:38am

I work with people from the semiconductor manufacturing industry. "photo-etch the rune sets" totally made my day.

Clell65619 replied:

- That's just a flash back to my younger days of hobbyist electronics when we would photo etch our own circuit boards, coupled with the intense surprise I felt very early in my technical training the first time I disassembled a mainframe processor and discovered that rather than discrete logical gates on the boards, there were electronic components.

- Dumb, I know, but there you go.

muggledad posted a comment on Friday 29th October 2010 9:57am

You know, Molly Hatchet has probably the best cover art of any band short of Iron Maiden. Just a thought.

I really enjoyed the 'people' aspect of this story. It seems to be about Harry, Tony, Sirius, Hermione... and they happen to be heroes or magical or whatnot.

Thanks for the update

Sean

DrT posted a comment on Friday 29th October 2010 4:26am

That was nearly a classical Hermie panic meltdown, not surprised Harry was sucked into it. Moony was certainly well-scolded, hopefully Sinistra will console him. If Remus wasn't outed as a were, will he be back next year, breaking the 'curse'?

ladyimmortal posted a comment on Thursday 28th October 2010 10:54pm

When you post an update to a story I always get all excited because I know it'll be high quality and FUN!

You didn't let me down.

Harry's varying moods are SOOO twelve-year-old. Poor kid lol.

I'm glad he was honest with Remus. I'm sure it hurt him but... truth is always better in the long run.

Loved the Aluminum debate!

joeBob posted a comment on Thursday 28th October 2010 10:40pm

Entertaining chapter. Thanks for the update.

Renzo7 posted a comment on Thursday 28th October 2010 9:46pm

Excellent chapter! This was very entertaining to read.

Keep up the excellent work. I hope you update soon.

DJ posted a comment on Thursday 28th October 2010 7:55pm

Well thsnks I had bin hoping for an update yo this fic it is soo much fun. You did the Harry/tracy bit very well thanks for writting.

Quincy posted a comment on Thursday 28th October 2010 5:51pm

I've been pumped to read this chapter for months and it didn't disappoint.

Lee Dickie posted a comment on Thursday 28th October 2010 5:05pm

Great writing of the childhood mood swings, thanks.

Riegert8 posted a comment on Thursday 28th October 2010 4:24pm

Well written chapter

ThunderGod posted a comment on Thursday 28th October 2010 3:05pm

Loved the fun with the correct way to say Aluminium (I'm an Aussie and pronounce it correctly):}

liquidfyre posted a comment on Thursday 28th October 2010 2:48pm

Rawrrr bout time you updated this one and good work on it too. Keep them coming, and if you can a bit faster pleeeeease. *puppy eyes*

millercommamatt posted a comment on Thursday 28th October 2010 1:11pm

I've never seen Remus of thoroughly skewered before. I found myself hanging my own head in shame reading it. I could see that really pushing Remus back to his post-James self destructive days.

millercommamatt posted a comment on Thursday 28th October 2010 1:08pm

If someone can construct a 16 bit ALU in minecraft, I feel confident that Harry can build a sufficiently speedy computer with runes. I wonder if anyone has ever done runic etching via photo lithography before?

Mark Safransky posted a comment on Thursday 28th October 2010 12:50pm

Oh, another awesome chapter!! Glad Padma figured out what was troubling her. Herminoe needs to lighten up. :) Hmm, Tracy now has the inside track on being Harry's first gorlfriend. Aluminum is the way to create a faster logic gate using magic? Have to see what the gang comes up with. Keep up the great work!!

mwinter posted a comment on Thursday 28th October 2010 11:49am

Are we talking the man code or the bro code here?

Clell65619 replied:

- Same thing

Jonathan Langford posted a comment on Thursday 28th October 2010 11:21am

The whole first-generation speed thing was great -- especially the part about Harry's expectations being so unrealistic because they're based on a much later generation of computer technology, and he's essentially (as you've depicted him here) an impatient soul. That said, I'm glad they're on the track to solutions. I'm glad he has friends who are bright enough to keep him on his toes. The girl-part was cute, and the Remus-smackdown quite well done. You think people might stop deifying Dumbledore anytime soon? Naah...

Silly_Billy posted a comment on Thursday 28th October 2010 11:10am

I really like this story, it's good to have an update.
Looking forward, without too much pressure, to the next chapter.
LOL.

genkitty posted a comment on Thursday 28th October 2010 9:59am

YES YES YES! You updated!!! YAY! I love this story, though I'm hoping you /won't/ kill off Padma in the 'real' story.

I'm really looking forward to the next update!

Clell65619 replied:

- No, that's not going to happen.