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DrT posted a comment on Friday 30th December 2011 8:21pm

Too bad Riddle was Muggle-raised -- the Pure-blood would still be looking in the wrong direction!

Good use/development of Susan, btw

Evan Mayerle posted a comment on Friday 30th December 2011 11:34am

After re-reading this, I've been thinking. Do you suppose that when Harry returns to Hogwarts and is asked what happened, he might answer that he had a "power that Tom didn't know"? I can see that confounding Albus all to pieces (after all, knowing something that ignorant tosser didn't qualifies, doesn't it?)

Pete DeLong posted a comment on Friday 30th December 2011 6:31am

An excellent story - I thought Marriage Contracts was good, but this is awesome. Along with Hogwarts' Dawn might be two of the funniest stories on fanfic. Please keep the story alive - woot!

georgialuvr posted a comment on Thursday 29th December 2011 11:28pm

keep it coming....just to fun a read not finnish..

Bob Officer posted a comment on Thursday 29th December 2011 9:53pm

The power of love.

Dumbles was almost right.

But Almost only counts in Danger, Dread and Dragons?

dan26 posted a comment on Thursday 29th December 2011 11:50am

Kindness is its own reward it seems. I wonder what ron would think of having a dragon share his name and harry was the reason?

Patches posted a comment on Thursday 29th December 2011 4:46am

This is a great chapter. It starts off with Ron being really clueless about the change in Draco's hair. Going from Sleek to boucy afro curls is something you would think anyone would notice. But not Ron. I'm glad that Flitwick dealt with them. I wish I could have seen two tall boys being led away by their ears by the diminutive professor. That would have been a sight! Hermione is really being clueless. Susan is telling her friends the truth and it is so unbelieveable that they can't get it. I'm sure it will take a little persuadeing to get through to them. Cedric being left behind by Harry grabbing the cup saved Cedric's life. Of course he has no way of knowing that. It was really better that way. Harry having to deal with Voldemort was bad but not unexpected. I really like the way you handled this. Taking it right up to the killing curse was very dramatic. Having Kiska's little dragons deal with the death eaters was great. Kiska really took care of the rest. I like Ron. Flaming Fart is more dramatic but I like "The Wrath of Ron"! It has a certain ring. I like the way the girls showed their affection. I can understand why Harry was still giggling 10 minutes later. I figure he took Voldy Monkey's wand and Peter's top half back with him. That way he can prove Voldemort is dead and Peter Pettigrew was still alive a short time before Harry brought part of him back. I look forward to more of this story. Thanks for writing. pms

Jason Karr posted a comment on Wednesday 28th December 2011 6:37pm

Leave it to Harry to end up being an uncle to five dragons

Rage and Light posted a comment on Wednesday 28th December 2011 9:49am

Oh that was great, I laughed myself silly. Voldy and his crew wasted by dragoons is not something I've seen before.You'd think a dark lord would know better than to piss off a fully grown dragon especially once it proved it was far more than he believed it was. Excellent and I can't wait for more.

Slytherin66 posted a comment on Wednesday 28th December 2011 2:31am

This was a great chapter.

Hermione's total faith in authority and books makes her too hard to deal with rather smug and a bit too much like Albus over confident and think they are never often wrong or are not going to admit it easily. I had hoped Susan would punch or slap her and that Harry's friendship with Hermione will end soon or when he leaves Hogwarts.

A perfect fight between Ron and Draco and just the right age level for them, Flitwick was funny.

At least the real Moody will be looked after once free and he will have a lot of lost time and living to make up for.

I do feel sorry for Fleur I never understood Hermione's attitute toward her is it the fact Fleur has way better hair than her. It would be nice if the French government has words with Fudge about what happened in the Tournament of the Giant Headmistress get angry or even.

I liked what was said about Cho and what was done to Victor was really funny.

Hagrids love of deadly animals really needs to be dealt with the giant spiders and his breeding program needs to be destroyed or stopped for the greater good (for real with no twinkle)

I like Ron the Dragon's other name, it was nice the dragons miss their uncle Harry so much. I loved the fate of the Dark Lord and his followers pure blood society will have big problems now with so many dead and those in Azkaban with luck stay there.

Nagini has some sense to know when not to fight, the mag was a good detail to include.

Thank you for having Harry try to escape and bring back proof I hope he can be free and happy from now on and stay with Susan or his dragon family to keep him out of trouble. I loved Susan's spirit and to stand up to her Aunt as well.

Her faith in Harry was good but rare as not many people really have faith in him Albus thought he needed help even if it was not much and Hermione I think only stuck with Harry in the last book because it was a job from Albus.

Thanks for this I look forward to what will happen next.

Gioia posted a comment on Wednesday 28th December 2011 2:04am

Excellent update! Thank you so much for sharing it with us, and thank you particularly for working hard to stick to your goal of weekly updates. I'm not sure how much further this story has to go, but I'll be following it until the end! I'm having a blast reading it

romero posted a comment on Wednesday 28th December 2011 1:43am

Excellent having the nieces and nephew to the rescue with Mom in tow. I'm hoping the evidence included Wormtail so that Sirius will be cleared.

noylj posted a comment on Tuesday 27th December 2011 10:56pm

There is no way that Bumbledork will accept voldie being dead.
As a reader, I want to know if the horcruxes are gone.
I certainly don't want the story to end to soon--there are Malfoys, and, I think, Snapes, and Bumblemore to kill.
Good to see Amelia still believes that adults are always right and deserve respect.
Too bad Hermy still believes that too.

Ronnie McMains posted a comment on Tuesday 27th December 2011 8:39pm

Did he grab enough of Pettigrew to positively identify him? Because coming back and saying, "Hey, Voldemort tried to come back, here's what's left of him," is cool, but throwing in, "Hey Minister, remember when I told you a year ago that Pettigrew was alive? Here's proof he was alive an hour ago, and look! There's a Dark Mark on his arm. Now, about my godfather..." is priceless.

XRaiderV1 posted a comment on Tuesday 27th December 2011 8:00pm

another excellent chapter.

heh, I like the dragons.

chuckmcdaniels posted a comment on Tuesday 27th December 2011 7:46pm

That was such fun to read! I figured Harry was a goner, but forgot about Kiska and her brood. Unless I miss my guess, we haven't seen Voldemort for the last time, right? I mean, Nagini does bear part of his essence, as I recall. Looking forward to the next installment!

ThunderGod posted a comment on Tuesday 27th December 2011 7:39pm

I want a Dragon for me as well

Wolf550e posted a comment on Tuesday 27th December 2011 7:39pm

This feels like a jeconais story. Not a complement. :-)

Michael Cornfoot posted a comment on Tuesday 27th December 2011 6:42pm

yay voldie is dead.

cant wait to see more!!

Hytekrednek posted a comment on Tuesday 27th December 2011 6:30pm

Oh god the humanity. This has got to be one of your best stories yet. Please focus on this story so you can get the chapters out quicker.

James