Content Harry Potter Original Young Justice

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silversong posted a comment on Monday 4th July 2011 2:12pm

Great story. Its been awhile though. Any chance is an update any time soon? (crosses fingers)

Logan_MacLeod posted a comment on Friday 10th June 2011 7:25pm

Ok, I have read [retty much everything you have written and I like them alot. This story is just awesome. You have to complete/update it soon man. I put this up there with the Harry Potter and the Power of Oa. Harry is saved from dying at the Dursleys by the last Guardian of the Green Lantern corps. Its good just like yours. And just like yours they stopped writing it lol. YOu have got to keep it up please please please.

hholidays posted a comment on Tuesday 7th June 2011 11:49pm

Harry presented his father with a long suffering look. "Oh, yes. The car you ‘helped’ with broke the freaking sound barrier and buried itself three inches into a concrete wall."

Another great line!

hholidays posted a comment on Monday 6th June 2011 8:41pm

She stroked the hair out of his eyes. "Harry, please, just take it easier alright? If you kill yourself, who would Hermione and I feel superior too? We need you."

I loved this line.

Tenchifew posted a comment on Tuesday 17th May 2011 6:05pm

Great Story! Very well written, nice character development, unusual plot. Really hope you will come back to it. Thank you for your writing.

rejndzer87 posted a comment on Sunday 27th March 2011 3:05pm

i cant believe no one has begged shamelessly for you to continue this story since december! oh well, if someone HAS to do it, i guess i might as well, now that i'm here:

PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEESEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE update!!!!

PLEEEEEEEEEEEEASEEEEEEEEEE!!!!

its so OMGWTFAWSOMEPWNAGEUBERNESS!!!! you HAVE to continue!!!!!

sufficient exclamation marks?

Clell65619 replied:

- I'm working on it.

nate_hy posted a comment on Saturday 26th March 2011 10:31pm

I disagree with the last statement in the A/N. He would make a mistake after killing Harry, namely; not comitting suicide. Because suicide would be so much easier on Tom than facing the Avengers.

QOShea posted a comment on Friday 4th March 2011 11:26pm

Sersi - But what a way to go!

QOShea posted a comment on Friday 4th March 2011 10:16pm

Clell, I have to ask.

When you were writing the part where Hermione was telling Harry about the Dark Lord bit, were you channeling Bill Cosby?

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=n0KHt8xrQkk

QOShea

johnsmith posted a comment on Tuesday 7th December 2010 7:39pm

please update soon, just spent the last day and a half reading what you have so far, and no story is long enough untill it takes me over a week to read it. and i average 700 to 900 pages a day, so get cracken :P. i was hesitant to read the story at first, wasnt sure if id like it, but after i started, decided it was one of the best cross-overs id read in awhile. i honestly have trouble trying to figure out if the there where any i liked better

Fanboyimus Prime posted a comment on Tuesday 23rd November 2010 11:13am

Interesting chapter. Though not sure why Hawkeye was on the East Coast time given he was leader of the West Coast Avengers at that time. Probably part of Harry's effect of being around.

And I do wonder if W.H.O. (Weird Happenings Organization) is aware of the Wizarding World and all that is going on there. And would be Harry's 5th year WHO be replaced with Black Air?

And will Voldemort find out about Mys-tech and how they gained immortality by sending so many souls to Mephisto? Or that he could have used the Bloodstone to gain immortality like Merlin Hellspawn or Ulysses Bloodstone have used.

And be amusing if Voldemort pissed off Doctor Doom or Apocalypse. Or get the attention of the Stranger.

The last thing is I believe that Silver Dagger would freak out if he found out about the Wizarding World.

Clell65619 replied:

- Clint was either visiting or maybe the whole West Coast thing didn't happen when Tony didn't fall into alcoholism... I don't know, I just always liked Hawkeye for his 'no powers just a whole lot of practice and skill' riff, much like Cap.

- Very little of the Marvel history of the time is going to bleed over into the story, for a lot of reasons, but mostly because I've got enough to do with the Magical UK aspects of the story... So, no to WHO, though they probably know about the magicals since SHIELD does. After all, in my story canon the Magicals in North America aren't hiding.

- Doom is coming into the story in 4th year... and yes, he's going to end up annoyed at Voldemort... but he will recognize Harry's prior claim and allow Harry his chance to deal with the feeb before Doom does it himself.

potterfanchuck posted a comment on Sunday 7th November 2010 9:40am

If I haven’t reviewed this before I definitely should have as I think it’s a great story. I'm not into comic book characters but am familiar with some of them. I hope you can find the time to update more often since this is a quite interesting story.

Ilonwy posted a comment on Saturday 6th November 2010 1:33pm

That's pretty darn awesome! I never really got that much into superheroes, but now I'm hooked! Thanks! Keep it up! :)

Anansii posted a comment on Wednesday 3rd November 2010 12:51am

Thanks for a nice long solid update. I'm enjoying this thing way too much to want it to vanish into the ether. Nice touch with Harry calling his dad at work... :)

marcelhm posted a comment on Sunday 31st October 2010 3:02pm

feeling this tension build up here :) but very much enjoyed these last 2 chapters. So thnx 4 that

Wolfric posted a comment on Saturday 30th October 2010 4:13pm

Fine chapter. The computer and relationship stuff is fun and the bit with Remus is dramatic. Thanks for writing. W.

Patches posted a comment on Saturday 30th October 2010 2:09am

This is really good. I like the way that Harry deals with all the people in his life. I feel sorry for Remus. He was threatened with charges if he went near Harry. Sirius was out of reach and Tony stepped in where no one else could. At least when he messes up Tony admonishes him to keep trying and to ask his friends for brainstorming ideas. Brainstorming is a great way to field diverse ideas. No ones idea should be rejected out of hand in a brainstormins session. An idea that won't work my trigger an idea that will work. Nothing is wasted and it allows creative thinking and creative actions that lead to results. I like Tony's answer when Harry wrote and asked about Tracey. Tony gave good advice. We will see how Harry does with his new way of receiveing "Thanks" from girls. At least he did say he really liked it. now it looks like they are making some headway in their project. I look forward to your next update. Thanks for writing. pms

Jim_xinu posted a comment on Friday 29th October 2010 11:13pm

Aluminium vs Aluminum is fun. And it's a great choice for their miracle material, since it's a relatively new metal. Good way to explain why it's not been used in magic before.

Good chapter, thanks for sharing it with us.

menentesa posted a comment on Friday 29th October 2010 9:21pm

Hey. Great story so far. I don't understand something though. How did Luna end up with the diary when it clearly talks about Percy and the Twins when the diary first appears? Just curious. Overall though this is a truly great story. Keep up the good work. :)

MarinePotterfan posted a comment on Friday 29th October 2010 8:41pm

Great chapter, I love the Harry and Tracy scene, it was too cute.
Harry response to it was great.
Thanks for writing
MPF