Anansii posted a comment on Thursday 1st December 2011 5:11pm

Grin. I wondered when I read the original if we were about to find out that parseltongue extended to more reptiles than snakes, but Rowling took a different tack. And I get the general impression Draco is going to be this fic's running gag, not that that's unusual.

Fic Chick posted a comment on Thursday 1st December 2011 4:37pm

I liked this & would enjoy seeing it continued.

itsme posted a comment on Thursday 1st December 2011 4:15pm

This was a lot of fun so far. Very different from other stories. I am looking forward to the rest of the chapters.

KDDR22 posted a comment on Thursday 1st December 2011 1:01pm

What a wonderful start to a story.. loved it . David

Hytekrednek posted a comment on Thursday 1st December 2011 1:00pm

I can tell that this is going to be one hell of a story and look forward to reading the remaining chapters. Keep up the good work.

heren10 posted a comment on Thursday 1st December 2011 12:14pm

Awesome start, looking forward to reading more!

Wolf550e posted a comment on Thursday 1st December 2011 10:32am

Did you mean to call the dragon "pussy" (as in "kitty") in Russian (and possibly Bulgarian)?

Clell65619 replied:

- Well, Kitten anyway. Dragon names get examined later in the story.

Yonexcannon posted a comment on Thursday 1st December 2011 9:45am

Did you mean "Magical Sentinet" rather than "Magical Sapient?"

Otherwise, tremendously entertaining start.

Clell65619 replied:

Nope. Sapience, the ability of an organism or entity to act with judgment.

Michael Cornfoot posted a comment on Thursday 1st December 2011 6:31am

very interesting first chapter

going to update with more or are you leaving this as a one shot?

Clell65619 replied:

- Six chapters, one a week for the rest of the year.

dan26 posted a comment on Thursday 1st December 2011 5:53am

Honestly after reading this story you have me curious as to what would happen next

Gaelyn posted a comment on Thursday 1st December 2011 5:19am

I see potential. Funny potential.

I likes this. Please say that the dragon will make another appearance, at the Yule Ball or at the final task? Really looking forward to more.

Clell65619 replied:

Why would a dragon come to the ball? I mean the cost of the gown alone...

XRaiderV1 posted a comment on Thursday 1st December 2011 5:08am

outstanding!

DrT posted a comment on Thursday 1st December 2011 4:58am

Good start to the story! That's one smart dragon! And I of course enjoyed Draco being taken down a peg or two

Patches posted a comment on Thursday 1st December 2011 4:56am

This is great. I really like Kiska. She has class. To pretend to fall over unconcious from a light spell from a 14 year old boy was fantastic. Harry came out a hero and the dragons got a huge laugh out of the whole thing. That and I believe all 5 of Kiska,s dragonettes have bonded with Harry. I sure that will play into the rest of the story. I love the fact that Xeno runs a paper for other sentient magical beings and they will all know the story of how a dragon made a deal with a human wizard to fool the wizarding world. I love the way she "tipped" Charlie for a job well done. Thanks for writing. I look forward to more of this story. pms

Chris1 posted a comment on Thursday 1st December 2011 4:39am

Awesome :D Really looking forward to the next chapter!

Princess Fictoria posted a comment on Thursday 1st December 2011 3:26am

I have read stories where Harry used parseltongue when facing they dragon, but yours was unique and funny... Good going. I must say, my favorite line is the last... "And four paternity charms confirm it, against all odds."

So happy to see more from you... Hope the holidays inspire your fellow authors... But mostly hope you have been richly blessed throughout the year. Happy Christmas (even if it is a bit early!)

Jeffrey Meehan posted a comment on Thursday 1st December 2011 3:01am

Like!

I would only put that but there is a character requirement

Rexnos posted a comment on Thursday 1st December 2011 2:49am

Huh... I've seen Harry talk to the dragon several times. However, he normally informs the dragon that one of the eggs is not hers and she gives it up since she has no use for it. I happen to like this version much better. Dragons are greedy horders by nature after all. Seems only right that she'd want something out of the bargain.

Interesting take on Lovegood too. As far as I know, it's an entirely unique platform, which is impressive considering the size of the fandom. I can only wonder just where you plan to go with this. I imagine the merpeople will hear about things or some such, but beyond that I'm drawing a blank. Guess I'll have to read more to find out.

Later,
Rex

Davideg posted a comment on Thursday 1st December 2011 12:56am

thank you for sharing this fantastic chapter please continue to update a.s.a.l.a. = (as soon as life allows)

catsim posted a comment on Thursday 1st December 2011 12:41am

*Snigger, snort* Lucius's reaction to Draco.....oh, so funny. Four paternity charms! LOL.

Love this story. Loved the greedy dragon, too. Poor Harry.

Cathy